Ok I've never written anything before, this is my first shot and if no one likes it it may be my last. I want to write between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn from Edwards perspective.
A lot of the first chapter is taken from the end of Eclipse, just to set the tone for the rest.
Chapter 1:
Remembering the happy day
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I sat on the divano in my bedroom thinking back on the giorno that Bella finally agreed to marrying me. We were in the meadow relaxing when I realized that she was just doing everything for everyone else. She wasn't thinking about herself like usual and had already agreed to let Alice plan the entire wedding with only a few limitations that Alice had to agree to. Those were that the wedding had to be planned da August 13th, that Bella had the ultimate veto on the guest lista and finally that if she went overboard on anything Bella would NEVER speak to her again. Now Bella should have realized that Alice already knew all of this, and had already started the planning but she could find out all of this after the wedding.
We were lying there when I decided that it wasn't fair that she was always the one that had to give in, she had to give up most of her "normal" life to be with me and maybe I should just give in to her one....well she called it her demand. She detto that the only thing that she wanted was for us to be together before she wasn't human anymore. I had argued and tried to convice her that this was all very dangerous and could end with her hurt o worse. She was explaining why she was giving everyone what they wanted before she had to break ties with them for either a long time if not forever when I stopped her with a kiss. She fought me for a secondo before giving in and began baciare me back. I could feel that she was not fully into this and pulled back far enough to look her in the eyes.
She explained that she wanted to do all of this "right" before she joined my family forever. I layed on my back stairing up at the sky trying to figure out this woman that I loved più then anything. She was defined da what she thought was right and wrong, she knew that she wanted to be with me no matter what I was and that meant giving up a lot of what she knew. She also knew that it was wrong to cut out the family that was her world and the Friends that made her who she was.
I was Lost in my thoughts as the rain began to fall, I heard Bella sigh and knew that this meant it was time to leave our perfect little place and return her to her house.
I was about to get up when she detto that she wanted the ring back and it was time to tell Charlie the truth. I sat there staring at her for a minuto before i realized that she was serious. I smiled and reached into my pocket pulling the glittering ring out and placing it on her finger.
I started laughing, looking around my room. I realized that in a few days time I would be married to Isabella Marie and she would be mine forever, well longer then forever but who was keeping track?
A lot of the first chapter is taken from the end of Eclipse, just to set the tone for the rest.
Chapter 1:
Remembering the happy day
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I sat on the divano in my bedroom thinking back on the giorno that Bella finally agreed to marrying me. We were in the meadow relaxing when I realized that she was just doing everything for everyone else. She wasn't thinking about herself like usual and had already agreed to let Alice plan the entire wedding with only a few limitations that Alice had to agree to. Those were that the wedding had to be planned da August 13th, that Bella had the ultimate veto on the guest lista and finally that if she went overboard on anything Bella would NEVER speak to her again. Now Bella should have realized that Alice already knew all of this, and had already started the planning but she could find out all of this after the wedding.
We were lying there when I decided that it wasn't fair that she was always the one that had to give in, she had to give up most of her "normal" life to be with me and maybe I should just give in to her one....well she called it her demand. She detto that the only thing that she wanted was for us to be together before she wasn't human anymore. I had argued and tried to convice her that this was all very dangerous and could end with her hurt o worse. She was explaining why she was giving everyone what they wanted before she had to break ties with them for either a long time if not forever when I stopped her with a kiss. She fought me for a secondo before giving in and began baciare me back. I could feel that she was not fully into this and pulled back far enough to look her in the eyes.
She explained that she wanted to do all of this "right" before she joined my family forever. I layed on my back stairing up at the sky trying to figure out this woman that I loved più then anything. She was defined da what she thought was right and wrong, she knew that she wanted to be with me no matter what I was and that meant giving up a lot of what she knew. She also knew that it was wrong to cut out the family that was her world and the Friends that made her who she was.
I was Lost in my thoughts as the rain began to fall, I heard Bella sigh and knew that this meant it was time to leave our perfect little place and return her to her house.
I was about to get up when she detto that she wanted the ring back and it was time to tell Charlie the truth. I sat there staring at her for a minuto before i realized that she was serious. I smiled and reached into my pocket pulling the glittering ring out and placing it on her finger.
I started laughing, looking around my room. I realized that in a few days time I would be married to Isabella Marie and she would be mine forever, well longer then forever but who was keeping track?
this is my opinion just to let te know so I am going to speak out loud and tell te what I think about Renesme and Jacob,i mean seriously Jacob marked Renesme as a baby so he can marry her I mean really he only did that cause he fell in Amore with Bella and she married Edward so since he noticed Renesme was exactly like bella he fell in Amore with her as a baby and that's why he marked her and that's why he married her that's what I think I watched the ending and all that with Jacob and Renesme and Belle and Edward on thye spiaggia with Renesme holding Jacobs hand cause they just married that was crazy that he married her anyways, that's my opinion thx for reading!!!!!!!
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It's all hats off now, all drum rolls and applause
da slight of the hand te will turn them into dust
A face to face te will lead them da the fall
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
It’s all good luck charms
All trying to understand
Indeed inside me will always hope for worse
te say te keep them close by
They're closer than te think
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
successivo spring will bring te back again
You'll sigh and crack the whip for us
And maybe te will be the one
Who'll draw the line in the sand
For us to crawl
It's all past bats now
All painting gorgeous time
And maybe when the night comes
You'll open up the cage
You'll open up the cage
da slight of the hand te will turn them into dust
A face to face te will lead them da the fall
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
It’s all good luck charms
All trying to understand
Indeed inside me will always hope for worse
te say te keep them close by
They're closer than te think
A track fiend and the saw dust
You're allowed to stare it out
successivo spring will bring te back again
You'll sigh and crack the whip for us
And maybe te will be the one
Who'll draw the line in the sand
For us to crawl
It's all past bats now
All painting gorgeous time
And maybe when the night comes
You'll open up the cage
You'll open up the cage
