yea i made the titolo to be something a little less opinionated, and più open to other peoples opinon. so if te agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! te have got a serious problem, and te are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, te may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves te UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do te do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin spazio girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, te ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT te DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that te are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! te have got a serious problem, and te are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, te may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves te UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do te do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin spazio girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, te ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT te DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that te are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!