Twilight la saga Article: Origional song: "Immortal Beings" hope u enjoy!

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Origional song: "Immortal Beings" hope u enjoy!

posted by Imyselfandme

The change...It did not happen fast,rearranged in a sudden whiplash,and now your this,strong and fast,be careful girl,cause it'll whiplash

Chorus:Your lips red as a rose,Your a stark beauty from your head to your toes,along with that pale face and chiseled nose,your definitely real,but te don't know what to feel (anymore) fighting in the night,your closed quarters,tight,yeah an immoral being alright,an immortal being alright

Your throat burns,your mind yearns,for a sedative te will never find,they're is no real cure,you never will really endure...everything that's happened to you!

(Chorus)

(Dark night,Twilight) Get a grip girl (Dark night,Twilight) this is the real world (Dark night,Twilight,Dark night,Twilight) Oh!

(Chorus)

An Immortal being,that's alright!

OkazakiDaisuke, jadakiss14 and 7 others like this

Imyselfandme PLEASE READ THIS TOO!!! Okay I wrote it from a guys perspective cause it was easier,it's about a newborn vampire who does not know what to do with her life now that shes changed. Imagine Muse or Lincon park singing this and you might even get the gist of the music,I constructed the song in that way to fit they're kind of voices (as I did with the "Hard to Resist" song with Rob) Please enjoy! I wrote this one for you!

ebcullen4ever i like it a lot.it's awesome,Arianna as are you,my new sis

Imyselfandme Ty u rock!

Elle-C You are quite the little lyricist -- with HUGE talent! If "The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner" ever hits the silver or small screen; your song is perfect for the soundtrack!! I really would love to hear your songs sung and set to music sometime...

Imyselfandme Oh,never thought of that,thnx 4 the feedback :) and thnx (of course) 4 saying I have Talent :)

edwardrobertcul omg!!! that's amazing, little sweet artist!!!!:):)

shazer that is amzaing you should get a perfressional artist to put the music to life for it is so amazing you should become a song writer in your free time

Robssesed Out of all the songs that i have read from u this is my favourite xxxx this is amazing babe!

Imyselfandme Thnx 4 all of your comments guys!!! U ROCK!!!

mr-cullen Loved it

princesstia411 [b] I love this song babe! It rocks!![/b]

johnlaughs loved it!!!!!!! Ur an amazing song writer and shazars right u should make it a profession ;)

Renesmee_08 [i]You should definitely contact a music producer or something. Song writing is the most amazing thing a girl like you could possibly do..xx [/i]