Okay so heres the secondo chapter. I had a lot of fun Scrivere this one! I hope te enjoy!
Renesmee’s POV:
Before I left the shack I watch Jacob walk back to the beach. It was nice to see him again. I hadn’t seen him since we left to go to New Hampshire six years ago. I was looking inoltrare, avanti to coming back to Washington so that I could see him. I was worried that he had changed but I guess I have changed più than he has.
I didn’t run I just slowing walked back down the hill. I wanted to go back to him, but he was right if some one saw me then I would be in huge trouble. I started to run, but it was più like a fast jog, back into the forest until I was successivo to the treaty line. I slowed to walk once I past the line. As I walked farther into the forest I noticed Rosalie and Emmett in a small opening. Emmett was leaning up against a large Oak albero with Rosalie wrapped in his arms. I kept on walking, hoping that would be Jake and me someday.
I walked for what seemed like forever until I made it to the creek. I stood there looking at my reflection for about five minuti until I jumped in. The water was refreshing. It wasn’t cold but it wasn’t hot either. It was just perfect. I waded in the water for a little while until I decided it was time to go home. I got out and started walking towards the house.
When I walked through the front door my mother and Alice were sitting in the front room looking at a foto album. Alice had a large grin on her face as she looked through it, same with my mother.
“Hey Nessie. Where have te been?” My mother asked.
“I took a walk through the forest.” I detto as I sat down successivo to Alice.
“How nice.” My mom said.
“Oh! Bella! Look at this one!” Alice screamed with joy as she pointed to a picture. The picture was of my mom, my dad, and me when I was a baby. I smiled and moved back so my mom could see it. I sat there for a little bit looking at pictures with them but then I got bored so I got up and went to my room.
I walked into my room and sitting on my letto was a red rose. I walked over to my letto and picked it up. There was a card attached to it as well. On the card it detto
‘Meet me at the beach. 7 pm.
Jake.’
I set the rose back down on my letto and smiled. I looked over at my clock sitting successivo to my bed. It was 6:00.
I grabbed the rose and and walked back into the front room. My mom and Alice were still looking through foto albums.
"Im going to go take another walk. I feel like I need some fresh air." I detto as I opened the door.
"Okay." My mom detto with out looking up from the pictures.
"Okay I'll be back later!" I detto as I shut the door than took off running. I knew it was still an ora before I was suposed to meet him so I thought I'd go to the other side of that spiaggia and hang out there until it was time.
Renesmee’s POV:
Before I left the shack I watch Jacob walk back to the beach. It was nice to see him again. I hadn’t seen him since we left to go to New Hampshire six years ago. I was looking inoltrare, avanti to coming back to Washington so that I could see him. I was worried that he had changed but I guess I have changed più than he has.
I didn’t run I just slowing walked back down the hill. I wanted to go back to him, but he was right if some one saw me then I would be in huge trouble. I started to run, but it was più like a fast jog, back into the forest until I was successivo to the treaty line. I slowed to walk once I past the line. As I walked farther into the forest I noticed Rosalie and Emmett in a small opening. Emmett was leaning up against a large Oak albero with Rosalie wrapped in his arms. I kept on walking, hoping that would be Jake and me someday.
I walked for what seemed like forever until I made it to the creek. I stood there looking at my reflection for about five minuti until I jumped in. The water was refreshing. It wasn’t cold but it wasn’t hot either. It was just perfect. I waded in the water for a little while until I decided it was time to go home. I got out and started walking towards the house.
When I walked through the front door my mother and Alice were sitting in the front room looking at a foto album. Alice had a large grin on her face as she looked through it, same with my mother.
“Hey Nessie. Where have te been?” My mother asked.
“I took a walk through the forest.” I detto as I sat down successivo to Alice.
“How nice.” My mom said.
“Oh! Bella! Look at this one!” Alice screamed with joy as she pointed to a picture. The picture was of my mom, my dad, and me when I was a baby. I smiled and moved back so my mom could see it. I sat there for a little bit looking at pictures with them but then I got bored so I got up and went to my room.
I walked into my room and sitting on my letto was a red rose. I walked over to my letto and picked it up. There was a card attached to it as well. On the card it detto
‘Meet me at the beach. 7 pm.
Jake.’
I set the rose back down on my letto and smiled. I looked over at my clock sitting successivo to my bed. It was 6:00.
I grabbed the rose and and walked back into the front room. My mom and Alice were still looking through foto albums.
"Im going to go take another walk. I feel like I need some fresh air." I detto as I opened the door.
"Okay." My mom detto with out looking up from the pictures.
"Okay I'll be back later!" I detto as I shut the door than took off running. I knew it was still an ora before I was suposed to meet him so I thought I'd go to the other side of that spiaggia and hang out there until it was time.
Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie te know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... o with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e Pianoforte for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie te know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... o with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e Pianoforte for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" o "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" o "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude commenti about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
