ok so this is my first stoy so please commento and tell me if te want me to continue and if te have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the successivo thing i knew he was on superiore, in alto of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward detto angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i detto through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are te and what do te want!?!i asked hard.my name is gelsomino im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i detto guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the successivo thing i knew he was on superiore, in alto of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward detto angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i detto through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are te and what do te want!?!i asked hard.my name is gelsomino im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i detto guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.