I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every minuto with her is a minuto to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her sposta and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions sposta me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that te know me so well?
Sometimes it seems te can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, da design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every minuto with her is a minuto to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her sposta and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions sposta me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that te know me so well?
Sometimes it seems te can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, da design.
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward o jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she detto when edward asked her,
" are te sure te made the right choice, i have never seen te in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she detto when edward asked her,
" are te sure te made the right choice, i have never seen te in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
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link
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keep refreshing and mute the volume if te get sick of it!
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total visualizzazioni 8:46 EST: 2,403,785 views!!!
11:27 EST: 2,438,042 million views
2 più million visualizzazioni needed to be at no.1!
COME ON TWILIGHERS!
link
open it in different windows to save time and all!
keep refreshing and mute the volume if te get sick of it!
LET'S mostra THEM TWILIGTERS!
total visualizzazioni 8:46 EST: 2,403,785 views!!!
11:27 EST: 2,438,042 million views
