Having trouble. but this is a long one

I woke up on a hard freezing cold floor with a killer head ache. i slowly got up and stood there waiting for the dizziness to go away. Its pitch black i cant see a thing, am i dead? what the hell happened? where am i? i have a thousand domande running through my head and i dont have an answer for any of them. I decided i had been standing here for long enough and started to walk around, until i ran straight into a bacheca and fell right on my bum. "Shit" i whispered under my breath. i got up and felt the bacheca with my hands. i kept walking wile tracing my fingers along the bacheca looking for an exit. i hadn't been walking for long and already i had felt the four corners of this room. "great im in a box" i mumbled,the dizziness came back and this nausea rolled over me and i vomited on the floor before passing out.

i woke up lying face first in my vomit. "yuck" i screamed and sat up, then the door suddenly flew open. i couldn't see much but his eyes were so bright.I cant be imagining this they look so real! he has bright red eyes! i screamed my lungs out, but out of no where his hand was holding my mouth shut "We can do this the easy way o the hard way" he detto in his deep hard voice. he removed his hand way from my mouth so i could speak "who the hell are te and where the hell am i" i screamed he just laughed and bent over so he was inches away from me "ok so let me get this straight, so te dont have to learn the hard way" he started to say but i was getting impatient.So i got up and tried to run, but i hardly moved when his strong firm hand was around my neck lifting me up off the ground. i could hardly breath. "i detto te could learn this the hard way o the easy way, but im guessing your picking the hard way" he yelled "and im fine with that" he laughed wile throwing me across the room and hitting my back on the hard rock wall. i was on my hands and knees gasping for air but he was already there pulling my hair up so i could look into his eyes "so are te ready now o do te want to get playing?"he asked. i could hardly talk my throat was killing me! i had excruciating pain running up and down my back and my head was going to explode. "well" he asked again wile slapping my face. i was unable to scream but i had tears running down my face.I couldn't bare the pain. its eating me alive.He was still staring at me with angry eyes. i nodded through the pain and the picked me up, throwing me over his shoulder and walked out the door, hitting my head on the way out.I flinched at the pain and screamed but that only made matters worst. He started to squeeze my leg so hard i could feel him breaking my skin, and his nails digging right into my leg. i squeezed my eyes shut and slapped my hands over my mouth and tried not to scream but i was crying myself a river. What did i do to deserve this? I felt the blood running down my face and leg."Hmmm she smells nice" i heard another voice sigh.Then he looked at me "Damm Demetri did te lose your temper?" he laughed. "well she didn't listen, how was yours?" Demetri replied "oh she is fine" he detto in an evil voice making me flinch " and Aro wants to see her" he detto wile disappearing into thin air.We kept walking through this tunnel then stop to open what sounded like a door.Then we continued the door slammed shut and i got thrown on the floor. i tried to catch my self but my wrists went from under me and i heard a snap.I screamed and fell face first onto the floor. im not sure how long i can kept up with this pain. it was everywhere now. i felt like it was taking over. i rolled over and saw these three guys sitting in thrown's? They looked very ancient and dressed in black robes. The oldest looking one got up and walked over to me "Now what do we have here?"he asked wile boring his milky eyes into me.