Hey!This is the first chap.of the new story I'm writing.Hopefully it will get better.Don't forget to comment!
Chap.1:Kayli
"Remind me why we're camping while it's snowing?"I asked Rob,my best guy friend.
"I was wondering the same thing,"My other friend,Hayden,said.
"Kayli,Hayden,I've already told you.It's the only time I could rent the campsite,and..."Rob lowered his voice."And there aren't any bears in the winter."
"You're afraid a orso might come?"I asked him,laughing and pulling my cappotto tighter.
"No!"Rob yelled,blushing.
"Yeah right,scaredy cat!"Hayden said.
We stomped through the snow.
I was surprised that my parents even agreed to let me come.They don't even let me stay over at Hayden's house,and yet,I get to go camping,for three days,with Hayden and Rob,with Rob being a boy my parents can't stand.
"So Rob,since te know where we're going,how much farther?My feet are killing me!"I complained.
"Not that much farther.The place is really cool.Uh,you know,to be a campsite.There's an empty cave there.It's really big.But,I don't know why we had to rent a campsite."Rob told us.
"Me either.It's just a campsite!"Hayden said.
"Same here."
We walked for a while.It was snowing very lightly.The snow was so pretty,but why did it have to be so cold?Too cold for me,being from the south.
We were in the mountains of Washington.I didn't know exactly where.I lived in Seattle,along with Rob and Hayden,and my mom,dad,and sister,Amy.We moved here when I was thirteen.Amy was only nine.I am now seventeen.
"Oh,guys,hold on a second."I said,pulling out my camera.I had promised Amy that I'd take pictures for her.The image I wanted to capture,was a deer standing in a snow covered meadow.
"Got it,"I said,running to catch up with the others.
"So,what are te guys doing for the rest of winter break?"I asked.
"My dad's talking me and Erina skiing."Rob said.Erina was his stepmom.
"Oh,cool!I've never been skiing,but I'd Amore to try."I told him.
"It's awesome!I'm the best ski-er out of my whole family."Hayden bragged.
"What are te gonna do for the rest of winter break,Hayden?"Rob asked.
"I dunno.Probably negozio a lot.Ooh,my mom's taking me to get a prom dress!"Hayden told him."Uh,have te asked anyone to prom yet,Rob?"
"Not yet,but I think I know who I'm gonna ask."He smiled and detto nothing else.
Hayden and I fell back,far enough so Rob couldn't listen in on our conversation."I think he's gonna ask me to prom!"Hayden whispered excitedly.
"Let's keep our fingers crossed,"I said.
No-one had asked me to prom,and I was okay with it.I didn't really like wearing dresses,skirts,and high heels.I was più of a Converse and tee,kind of girl.And,I hate to admit it,but I couldn't really dance.Nobody ever showed me how.
"I don't get why te don't want to go to prom,Kayli.If te don't go this year,you have to go successivo year.I mean we're gonna be seniors successivo year!"I sort of tuned her out.
"Hayden!"She kept talking."Hayden...HAYDEN!"
"Woah,what?"She asked.
"We're here."
***
"Wow!You were right;this cave is huge."I detto to Rob."But,why is there a cave at a campsite?"
"I dunno,but I finally remember why we had to rent this place."He said.
"Why?"
"It's not a public campsite.Some old rich dude bought the land,and doesn't have any use for it,so he rents it out."
"That make perfect sense."I said.
"I don't like your sarcastic tone,Ms.Johnson."Rob detto jokingly.
"You're so weird,"
"I take that as a compliment."We were setting up sleeping bags.We didn't have to use tents because we were sleeping in the cave."So,changing the subject,who volunteers to get some firewood?"
Neither of us answered."No firewood,no s'mores,my friends."
"I'll go!"Hayden said.I looked at her funny."What?I have a sweet-tooth."
She started toward the front of the cave."Stay away from all the bears!"I called,which made Rob blush.
"Will do!"She detto back to me,and went into the snowy woods.
Chap.1:Kayli
"Remind me why we're camping while it's snowing?"I asked Rob,my best guy friend.
"I was wondering the same thing,"My other friend,Hayden,said.
"Kayli,Hayden,I've already told you.It's the only time I could rent the campsite,and..."Rob lowered his voice."And there aren't any bears in the winter."
"You're afraid a orso might come?"I asked him,laughing and pulling my cappotto tighter.
"No!"Rob yelled,blushing.
"Yeah right,scaredy cat!"Hayden said.
We stomped through the snow.
I was surprised that my parents even agreed to let me come.They don't even let me stay over at Hayden's house,and yet,I get to go camping,for three days,with Hayden and Rob,with Rob being a boy my parents can't stand.
"So Rob,since te know where we're going,how much farther?My feet are killing me!"I complained.
"Not that much farther.The place is really cool.Uh,you know,to be a campsite.There's an empty cave there.It's really big.But,I don't know why we had to rent a campsite."Rob told us.
"Me either.It's just a campsite!"Hayden said.
"Same here."
We walked for a while.It was snowing very lightly.The snow was so pretty,but why did it have to be so cold?Too cold for me,being from the south.
We were in the mountains of Washington.I didn't know exactly where.I lived in Seattle,along with Rob and Hayden,and my mom,dad,and sister,Amy.We moved here when I was thirteen.Amy was only nine.I am now seventeen.
"Oh,guys,hold on a second."I said,pulling out my camera.I had promised Amy that I'd take pictures for her.The image I wanted to capture,was a deer standing in a snow covered meadow.
"Got it,"I said,running to catch up with the others.
"So,what are te guys doing for the rest of winter break?"I asked.
"My dad's talking me and Erina skiing."Rob said.Erina was his stepmom.
"Oh,cool!I've never been skiing,but I'd Amore to try."I told him.
"It's awesome!I'm the best ski-er out of my whole family."Hayden bragged.
"What are te gonna do for the rest of winter break,Hayden?"Rob asked.
"I dunno.Probably negozio a lot.Ooh,my mom's taking me to get a prom dress!"Hayden told him."Uh,have te asked anyone to prom yet,Rob?"
"Not yet,but I think I know who I'm gonna ask."He smiled and detto nothing else.
Hayden and I fell back,far enough so Rob couldn't listen in on our conversation."I think he's gonna ask me to prom!"Hayden whispered excitedly.
"Let's keep our fingers crossed,"I said.
No-one had asked me to prom,and I was okay with it.I didn't really like wearing dresses,skirts,and high heels.I was più of a Converse and tee,kind of girl.And,I hate to admit it,but I couldn't really dance.Nobody ever showed me how.
"I don't get why te don't want to go to prom,Kayli.If te don't go this year,you have to go successivo year.I mean we're gonna be seniors successivo year!"I sort of tuned her out.
"Hayden!"She kept talking."Hayden...HAYDEN!"
"Woah,what?"She asked.
"We're here."
***
"Wow!You were right;this cave is huge."I detto to Rob."But,why is there a cave at a campsite?"
"I dunno,but I finally remember why we had to rent this place."He said.
"Why?"
"It's not a public campsite.Some old rich dude bought the land,and doesn't have any use for it,so he rents it out."
"That make perfect sense."I said.
"I don't like your sarcastic tone,Ms.Johnson."Rob detto jokingly.
"You're so weird,"
"I take that as a compliment."We were setting up sleeping bags.We didn't have to use tents because we were sleeping in the cave."So,changing the subject,who volunteers to get some firewood?"
Neither of us answered."No firewood,no s'mores,my friends."
"I'll go!"Hayden said.I looked at her funny."What?I have a sweet-tooth."
She started toward the front of the cave."Stay away from all the bears!"I called,which made Rob blush.
"Will do!"She detto back to me,and went into the snowy woods.
Hey!Another short chapter.Sorry,but this is all I could think of.Don't forget to comment!~werewolflover
Chap.4:Rob
Why wasn't Kayli back yet?It was getting dark.
"I'm going to find her."I told Hayden,putting on my coat.
"Rob,it's a blizzard out there...stay,for me."She said.
"So te don't even care if she freezes to death out there?Seriously Hayden.Sometimes...I don't know why I even talk to you."I said.And without even another glance at her,I went to look for Kayli.I preyed she was okay.
BTW,do te want another chap in Rob o Hayden's POV?
Chap.4:Rob
Why wasn't Kayli back yet?It was getting dark.
"I'm going to find her."I told Hayden,putting on my coat.
"Rob,it's a blizzard out there...stay,for me."She said.
"So te don't even care if she freezes to death out there?Seriously Hayden.Sometimes...I don't know why I even talk to you."I said.And without even another glance at her,I went to look for Kayli.I preyed she was okay.
BTW,do te want another chap in Rob o Hayden's POV?