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posted by Sweet_Pants
A/N: Ok, this is just a short, about 500 word drabble I came up with. It's about 7-year-old Alice and her drunk derpressed father, called, of course, 'Daddy'. It's not much, but I though I'd post it. Constructive critisizm is welcome.

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The smell of his breath came off in waves of grief and alcohol mixed into what could be described as inner turmoil. Although Alice barely gave a thought to the bottle of whiskey in his hand, as she was più preoccupied with not throwing up from the smell of her father she should have gotten used to in the few weeks that passed. Outside’s mocking sun shined through the window, a reminder that time was passing that didn’t seem to get through the house grieving of its missing occupant.

    Grimly, Alice tugged at the torn sleeve of her father’s overly worn shirt, causing him to stir from his unconscious sleep, the whiskey falling out of his grip and spilling over Alice’s school clothes.

    “Ugh.” Alice mumbled, catching the bottle over her pants before it could spill over more, setting it at the floor on the edge of the old ragged sofa.

    “Love bug?” she heard her father’s nickname for her, hoarse and barely audible, unlike the love-y its-gonna-be-alright fatherly tone he usually used with her, reassuring and annoying at the same time.

    “Hi dad,” Alice told him, attempting a smile for his benefit, but what she was sure came out like più of a grimace then anything.

    “Why aren’t ya in school?” he asked, his speech coming out slurred, his face mostrare no attempt at disapproval.

     Alice shrugged. She hadn’t been to school for two weeks.
    “Yur mum was supposta take you.” her father murmured, his voice already fading. He took the bottle of whiskey from the floor, frowning at the amount left of its contents.

    A shock of agonizing pain went through Alice’s cuore as she thought of her mother. Alice opened her mouth, preparing to say ‘Momma’s gone, she left’, but decided against it.

    “I guess she forgot.”

    “Well, it doesn’t matter,” he said, smiling a drunken smile. “Now I got my little bug to myself for the whole day.” he exclaimed, a faint happiness in his voice.

    But he was already fading, the alcohol taking its toll so soon after relieving it. A mixture of bile and something else went up Alice’s throat, tears stinging her eyes.

    “Yeah dad.” Alice detto softly, speaking in a prayer. “The whole day. Just us.”

    “My little girl...” he mumbled one last time before he closed his eyes again.

    Outside in the distance a corvo laughed, and the children played. Mothers yelled out at their children in the front of their yards, and the children rolled their eyes at each other. Couples shared a secret, whispering things in each other’s ears that would make them both laugh. Loners walked along the sidewalk, staring into space, a mysterious mist surrounding them.

    The clouds passed through the sun, giving the world an odd moment of silence and timelessness. The wind whispered a few secrets, but the plants never moved. Tumble weeds held their breaths.

    Just for a moment.

    Then the sun came out, Victorious as the world started to sposta again. But instead celebrating the sun, Alice decided to live in brief moment the clouds granted her.

    Fulfilling a silent promise, Alice crawled up into her father’s arms, ignoring the lump fighting up her throat, never minding she wouldn’t be able to sleep.
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“What do you want me to do… repent or something?”
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What u will need
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U might get all the powers but put your first choice on your pic.
First get a pencil and paper and draw your tail what u want it 2 look like I would recommend the u draw your chest as well for better results. Lable your pics!
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posted by Mermaidgirl11
Hi today i will tell te haw to become a mermaid


Side effects:
-itchy legs
-drinking lots of water
-singing allot


Method:

Get into the doccia take your shower.
near the end say this spell:
Mermaid magic come to me
I would like a tale not two feet beuaty be upon me pesce of all kinds let me see when im finished in the sea when im dry let my feet return to me SO MOTE IT BE

When te say it make sure your wet
Then dry up
successivo time te touch water close your eyes imagine te being a mermaid and count to ten out loud then te should fall over and open your eyes

FIND THE MAGIC TALE

WARNING
THIS MAY NOT WORK FOR te
I DID NOT MAKE IT UP MY SELF
I GOT IT FROM Youtube
BUT IF IT WORKS TELL ME ILL TYPE IN più SPELLS
THIS IS MY FIRST ONE
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posted by Insight357
When hate is in your heart
Don’t be afraid to tear yourself apart
Through your demonic fear
Until te hear
The angeli sing
Thy blessing
When te hear heaven’s
Yell te wonder if the seven
Of sins were committed
It was te who committed them
And te wil burn for sin

te are consumed da wretched flames
And through everyones aims
te are never hit
Nor bit
da the fuoco consuming you


Screams from hell
Sound like ringing from a bell
Things of silence
Are really screams
People of benevolence
Have bright beams
Of hope and light

te are consumed da wretched flames
And through everyones aims
te are never hit
Nor bit
da the fuoco consuming you

We are listening
We aren’t missing
We know what lies within
So raise your chin
Look at the world with your pessimistic gleam
And seem
All so picture perfect
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Okay this is a really random stroy but I was bored and I couldn't get this idea out of my head. In my opinion it is really badly written so sorry.

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I stared at the Chapter...
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