Scrivere Article: Broken Dreams Chapter 19

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posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

A giorno passed. I didn't hear from her. I didn't have her new cell number, I couldn't contact her.

I started the two and a half ora long drive to where she she lived.

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I knocked on her door. She didn't answer. I couldn't blame her. She probably hated me right now.

I tried the handle, and it swung open easily. Deathly quiet.

I suddenly saw a piece of paper stuck to her bedroom door. I saw my name. I ripped it of and read what was written.

Shaun,

I'm leaving. Please, please, don't tell anyone why. Pretend te don't know. Act like I never existed.

Don't come looking for me. I want te to finish college, and sposta on. te deserve happiness, which I can't ever give you, no matter how much I wish I could. And don't blame yourself. It's my fault. It's entirely my fault.

I still Amore you, and I always will.

Serena.

te gave me happiness, Serena. And I'll always blame myself. I ha rubato, stola your future. I have no reason to ever want anyone else. te are and te always will be my everything.

I turned around, with the letter still in my hand. I'd do whatever it took to do everything she asked of me. I owed her that much. I loved her too much.

medouri, Nice-Guy and 8 others like this

_madz_ oh, that so sad!! your writing is perfect though :) i love it, cant wait for the next one!! tell me its out soon!!

Liepe *sighs* love. Awesome story!

123moo123 oh... so good!

Injury love it

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Gods: Chapter 4: Dead

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

That night I locked my windows it seems it only really brings me trouble. But again I couldn’t sleep. “Knock, knock” Dawn detto coming in her voice was gentle. “Hey, you’re up late” I detto getting out of bed. “Yeah, what did Ethan do?” she said, Dawn could read your anger. “Nothing, there was just a misunderstanding, that’s all” I said. “Really?” she said. “Well we kissed” I detto now sitting on my bed. She followed and sat down successivo to me. “Wow, Why?” she asked, “Why would te ask me why?” I asked. “Because te have always detto that te would never go...

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Waiting for Mr Right (heartache)

posted by XhuddyobsessedX

I looked out the window at the man I wanted to be with. He doesn't know my name o that I watch him leave for work everyday. He doesn't even know I live successivo door to him. But, one giorno that will change.
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The successivo giorno I brought myself to go meet the man I had watched from my window for so many years. I wanted to know evetything about him. And most of all, I wanted him to know everything about me. From the secondo I saw him I knew we were ment to be.

I went up to his door and knocked on it. It opened. He looked at me with curiosity.

"Can I help you?"

"Um..yes...

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To write

added by roxy_cutegirl

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A poem

posted by DietCokeGirl

I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd Amore some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).

Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
te are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows

That we are one. And as te lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are cuore at name.

te may notice that only the secondo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to mostra the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.

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The Imaginary Scrivere Process

added by vampiress015

Very funny... because we all used to think that's how things worked.

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my first attempt at a ballad, how do te think I did?

posted by sweet_n_silly

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

Thy language foul, it bothered me,
But I saw through thy ettiquit.
I had seen thine sincerity.
Our conversations my giorno lit.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

For hours we would sit and talk.
Secretly I admired thee.
My pain I let thee block.
I wanted to know if thou didst too Amore me.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 19

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

A giorno passed. I didn't hear from her. I didn't have her new cell number, I couldn't contact her.

I started the two and a half ora long drive to where she she lived.

**************************************************

I knocked on her door. She didn't answer. I couldn't blame her. She probably hated me right now.

I tried the handle, and it swung open easily. Deathly quiet.

I suddenly saw a piece of paper stuck to her bedroom door. I saw my name. I ripped it of and read what was written.

Shaun,

I'm leaving. Please, please, don't tell anyone why. Pretend te don't know. Act like I never existed....

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Liepe *sighs* love. Awesome story!

123moo123 oh... so good!

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Broken Dreams Chapter 18

posted by BellaSwan636

Rion

I listened as she told me that she was pregnant, and running away from Arizona. I immediately offered to let her stay with me, and at first she refused, saying she didn't want to mess my life up, that she just wanted me to keep silent. I insisted, telling her I'd pick her up when her flight landed, whether she liked it o not.

She's like a sister to me, and if she needed help, I'd come and give it.

I hung up, sighing. I had lots of space. Heck, my apartment had three extra rooms with on-suite bathroom. Why did she think it was such an issue?

My thoughts were interrupted as my timid assisstant...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 17

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

I'd driven to the nearest airport, but even so, it was a three ora drive. It was mid morning when I got there, because I'd left my apartment at dawn.

I decided to leave my car in the parking lot. It wouldn't matter anymore.

They wouldn't be able to track me down. I'd upgraded my cellphone about a week fa and hadn't gotten around to telling anyone my number.

I stopped at an ATM and drew out the cost of a flight. To New York.

The line was frustratingly long, and my luck was clearly out because the successivo flight was in another three hours. I checked my baggage in anyway, and sat down in...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 16

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

I couldn't tell my mom. I tried, and I just couldn't. What's worse, she didn't try to make me.

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Later, I had cried out every tear I had, but it wasn't enough.

Just as I'd parked my car outside the complex where I now lived, a spark of hope flared inside me.

No one ever would know.

I sprinted up the stairs, I just couldn't handle the idleness of taking the elevator. I needed to run.

I burst through the door and immediately headed for the hall closet.

I pulled out a large suitcase and stuffed as many of my clothes as I could in it.

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Broken Dreams Chapter 15

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

About an ora after she called me, I was still sitting there. Unresponsive.

The phone rang again. I forced myself to pick it up.

It was Serena. She was crying.

"I couldn't do it," she said, before hanging up again.

Serena

I couldn't do it. As soon as I was out of the clinic, I drove home. When I'd parked my car, I couldn't hold the tears back.

I looked up, shocked. I had gone to my mother's house.

I stumbled out of the car, and my mother came running out. I collapsed in her warm arms, still sobbing.

Kate

I hear my daughter. Crying. I run outside, and hug my angel, my little angel.

I don't try to make her tell me what's wrong. She'll tell me when she wants to. I know her that well.

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Broken Dreams Chapter 14

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"Sign here, great. Sit down anywhere you'd like," a falsely cheerful, bleached blonde receptionist says.

I sit down on a plastic chair in the corner, successivo to a large plastic fern.

It's all just a nightmare. If I get the abortion, it will all go away, and everything will be fine, I try to convince myself. I give up eventually. What if my own mother, who was in a very similar situation to the one I am in now, had decided not t have me?

My thoughts are interrupted as a young looking woman with a small toddler on her hip walks up to me. I am the only other person here.

"Could te please hold...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 12

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

All of that seems so long ago. più than the two years it has actually been. Because right now, I'm torn in my desperation and fear. Because right now, I am nineteen.

I am nineteen, and I have too much to fear. I made one mistake, and now my entire future has changed.

Two weeks ago, I found out.

I had just moved into my new apartment. It was close to the università I would be attending in the fall. Shaun is going to one in another state. He is helping me sposta in. Finally, it is all done. He sits on the couch, and I go into my new cucina to fetch us something to drink.

This is probably...

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Alyria 3

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: I'm back lol. Did anyone miss me. *hears no applause sniffs and cries* lol. Sorry i just had sugar. Anyway, ummm, yeah people who read this (Very few then lol) Sorry thats my attempt at a true but very bad joke. ANyway people um with these, it depends because each chapter we'll probably be about her time in the dream o in the hospital. so if te don't like that I'm sorry. So lets begin.
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It didn’t take long for me to fall asleep and I was momentarily floating in darkness when I felt a rush of wind. I gasped as I felt that familiar painful sensation of all my injuries being combined...

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Alyria chapter 2

posted by Free_Spirit

ME:Um, yeah people te might find this a bit wierd but each chapter sory of goes from her time in the hospital and then in the other world. Sorry if te don't like the way its done but you'll just have to live with it. Um anyway enjoy. And I'm sorry if this is long. Cough rate cough please cough soory i got a bit of a cold

I sat up gasping and sweating. The moonlight shone through the window giving the hospital room a dim light. I remembered the dream as vividly as if it happened yesterday. I put a hand on my back and felt along the skin. I almost fainted. There was blood there and scrapes across...

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fanpop Writer's Group

posted by harold

This articolo presents the concepts of the fanpop Writer's Group, and was last edited on 6 July 2009.

Session Information
The third session for 2009 is postato link. Please participate!

Previous sessions
* Session 2, 2009: link
* Session 1, 2009: link

What is the fanpop Writer's Group?
It's a group of fanpop users who are committed to writing, sharing, reading, discussing and critiquing their work. At a minimum, this involves a monthly session (though it could be twice monthly). Each session involves the following:

1) One member starts the successivo session da starting a new forum thread labeled "Fanpop Writer's...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 6

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

I sat with Tia and her friends, but I could feel Shaun's stare.

After school, I was in a hurry to get in my car, so I didn't see him coming as I fumbled for my keys.

"Serena, how strongly are te opposed to seeing a movie with me this weekend?" he asked.

I looked up, at first not believing what I was hearing. I was aware that it was Thursday. Very aware.

"Unopposed," I said, so happy. Inexplicably happy, as I met his eyes. They weren't black, just a very dark brown.

"I'll pick te up," he said.

"Come to this address," I said, scrawling my strada, via and house number on a piece of paper my...

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A quick romance. its my first kinda Scrivere sorta thing (:

posted by _Blackhearts_xx

I store deeply into his eyes as he slid his hand close to mine. the heat in the air around me began to heat up, my cuore pounded rapidly against my chest and a feeling of anxiety rushed through my body.

His hand moved too hold mine, he moved it slowly, continuing to gaze into my eyes. The twinkle in his eye turned to a bright shine as the twilight began to rise, Hypnotized, i joined his hand with mine, the burning tension in the air, the smile that arose on his lips, this was perfect.

" I Amore You" he whispered softly in my ear, his breath warm. He brushed his lips against my face and kissed...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 3

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

The successivo day, I sat at the same table.

When I glanced up at him, he was looking at me too, indecision and frustration written all over his face.

I looked down quickly, and went back to deciphering the laminated wood grain.

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The rest of school dragged da very slowly, and da the final bell, I was already hurrying out of the Biology lab.

As I exited the main building, I immediately felt someone was staring at me. I'd always been able to tell when there was someone was looking at me, I was weird that way.

I turned, and in the diviso, spalato secondo that...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 2

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

He looked up and I wasn't sure, but I thought his gaze softened a little.

"Can I sit here?" I asked cautiously.
"Whatever," he said, sounding bored out of his mind.
"My name's Serena," I said.
"Shaun."

We sat in silence for the rest of lunch, I was eating nothing. The secondo the campana, bell rang, he stood up, abruptly and left.

I was left staring in confusion at the doorway I was mostly certain he'd disappeared down.

Shaun

I didn't want to hurt her, yet I didn't want her to be sucked into my depressing world of suffering. What was I supposed to do?

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