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posted by khfan12

Vialo By: Josie Mahre

Prolige
"Run, Ella, run!" detto Vialo. "I'm running as fast as I can!" Ella said. Vialo is a 14-year-old girl with the unique name Vialo Tarah Wilson, also, she has superpowers and the ability to take over / rule the universe / save the universe. Her friend, Ella Newbie, also has superpowers. "Ella, we can hide here." detto Vialo. "Vialo, go on without me. I'll catch up." detto Ella. "No. I'll just telaport us out." detto Vialo. "No! Vialo, they'll find te easier!" detto Ella. All of a sudden, some people walked up to them. "You two aren't out yet?" asked one. "No Jasper. we aren't as smart as you" detto Vialo, kidding around. Jasper Talley is 14, has superpowers, is also her boyfreind. Steve Hawks is 14 and has superpowers too. Then, a gas spread into the room. "Oh no! Knock out gas!" detto Steve. As Vialo coughed on the gas, she saw someone coming. "J-Jess, h-help us......" Vialo said, as her and the others fell asleep. Later, Vialo and her freinds woke up. "Vialo! te okay? I always knew that Jess was evil. Jess was always working with Jack." detto Jasper. "Hey! te prisoners, Jack and Jess will see te now. We'll escort you." detto a guard. 3 other guards stepped out. The guards looked like trolls. They were mucleheads. They threw the cage doors off. "Will ya cut that out? were'nt made of money!" detto one guard. They each grabbed someone and started walking. "Well, well, well. Look who it is. If it isn't Vialo and her freinds. te change your mind yet?" asked Jack. "No. I'd rather die than desert my freinds. Remember, Jack, we'll never forget what te did." detto Vialo. Jack grabbed her. "Yes but I'll never forget you, Vialo." detto Jack. Vialo and her freinds always knew that Jack liked Vialo, but Vialo and Jasper are going out instead and plus, Vialo never liked bullies. "Hey get your hands off of me!" detto Vialo, trying to yank her arm away from Jack. Jack laughed. "You're still the same old Vialo. The same one that I fell in Amore with 2 years ago." He pulled her close. "And I'm still in Amore with you." Jack said. Vialo wriggled free, then slapped Jack. "I'll never Amore someone like you. te know I never liked bullies." detto Vialo. She spit on him. That did it. "WHY te LITTLE!" Jess said. She lunged at Vialo, aiming to punch, punzone her. One of the guards held her back. "Freeze them!" detto Jack. When they were in the freeze chamber, Vialo and Jasper hugged. "I Amore you, Vialo." whisperd Jasper. "I Amore te too, Jasper." replied Vialo. As they hugged, Vialo, Jasper, Ella, and Steve were frozen. "Want to take them out?" asked Jess. "No. They'll defrost quicker. Leave them in there." detto Jack, walking away from the scene.

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posted by Twilightsauce

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Love Twilightsauce

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posted by HouseMindFreak

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posted by mitchie19

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posted by JohnnyCadeskid

Music: Shattered

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posted by ButteBaby_K

An image found that somewhat looks like the image of Phim I had in my head. ")

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posted by M169

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posted by I_DONT-KNOW

hI EVERYONE THIS ONES GOING TO BE SHORT BUT VERY IMPORTANT SOOOO READ ON.............................

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posted by I_DONT-KNOW

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posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

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posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

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