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By: moolah
Chapter Two: Party
    Haley sat at Anne’s feet and had Joey in her lap. Suddenly Haley’s iphone vibrated in her pocket. She picked it up and opened the text from Sean.
Sean- Ware r u? I’m @ home. Come home quick!
Haley sighed and texted him back.
Haley- I’m @ Anne’s house. Why what’s rong?
Haley sighed and got up off the ground. “Sorry. I have to go, Anne.” She detto and hugged the kids and left. When she got home the house was full of chaos. “Oh my god, Sean! It’s a mess!!!” Haley screamed over the kids. “I know, honey.” He detto and kissed her. “I thought we’d do something tonight.” Haley smiled and picked up Andy. “Hi, baby girl-how are you?” Andy smiled and hugged her mommy’s neck.
    Hannah had Cole on her hip as she made her way over to Jessica and Jennifer who were playing Chess as best as they could (which meant they were throwing the pieces around). Jessica looked scared whenever she saw her mom’s sorta angry look. Cole was crying into his mother’s chest. “Jessica Lee Noel, Jennifer Kato Noel…did te say something to your brother?” Jessica gulped and looked at Jennifer for some assistance. Jen looked like she was going to cry. “Jessica. Jennifer? Anyone want to get spanked?” Jessica screamed at the superiore, in alto of her lungs. “STOP IT, Jessica! Do not say anything like that ever again!” Hannah screamed. “I sorry mommy!!!” Jessica yelled and started crying. Hannah smiled to Cole and put the two kids on timeout for 20 minutes.
    “Jordon talk to me!” Anne begged again. “WHY?!?” Jordon finally exploded the silence. “You just bought that TV without permission! I got laid off, Anne!” Anne whimpered and curled up in a ball on the floor. “I’m sorry.” He heard. He knelt down to his wife, “Look-next time te want to buy luxuries, and we have run the numbers.” Anne nodded and hugged the 22 anno old. Then they kissed for like an ora until Joey started to wail. It was a piercing sound-Anne got up and held the baby in her arms. She put him to sleep and went back to her room where Jordon was just laying…looking so…hot.
    Tucker looked into the baby’s eyes as he cried. Lindsay had died during labor. Ashlynn came out, “I’m so sorry, Mr. Shuman.” Ashlynn detto and sat down successivo to Tucker. “I can’t believe she died.” Ashlynn nodded and took the bloody gloves off. “Mr. Shuman-would te like to come home with me tonight for dinner?” Tucker nodded, “Thank you, yes, I would. And call me Tucker.” Ashlynn smiled and helped Tucker out of the rosa cushy chair with the baby. “Are te ready to meet my husband and my kids?” Ash asked. Tucker laughed and nodded, “Oh, yeah and my kids friend Jasmine?” Tucker continued his laughing frenzy until the little booger, Thomas started to wail. “Oops.” Tucker said. Ashlynn sighed and took the baby boy and rocked him. He fell asleep and Ashlynn silently handed a nurse named ‘Barb’ the baby. “Thanks, Barb!” she yelled as she ran out to her Ford truck.
    Luke was wrangling two squirming girls in his grip when Ian started to scream at the superiore, in alto of his lungs. Luke sighed and shut his eyes tight, “Girls-stay out of trouble!” he detto and ran as best as a man can with 2 girls hanging onto his skinny jean pants. Ian was in his bouncy scooter bouncing away. “Ian, baby boy, what’s wrong?” Luke asked as he carefully picked up the baby. But then both Kat and gelsomino lurched forward. Luke flung inoltrare, avanti in like slow-mo and got himself turned around so when they fell Ian was lying on Luke’s chest. Ian started to laugh which surprised Luke because he’d just had a major fall. gelsomino started to laugh which caused Kat to laugh. Luke put Ian on the floor and sat up. Now, he had a major headache. He looked around. The divano which was usually amazing, leather-Luke’s favorite. And the coffee tables were covered in mysterious red gook. Suddenly his Friends Sean and Haley barged in. “HI!” Haley detto and handed Luke Adrian. “Here’s Uncle Luke!” Haley detto and ran into the cucina to find some of his kids. “Hey, man!” Sean detto putting down Andy, Katlynn, and Eli. Eli ran over to Ian. Ian was clapping his hands because he saw Eli. Luke said, “Yo! What’s up?” “Nothing much, Hal’s been begging for a giorno off.” Luke laughed and looked over at Haley. He laughed; she was playing with the girls. “So, what are te guys doing here? Shouldn’t te be at a fancy mansion?” Sean rolled his eyes, “Nope-your wife invited us!”
    Hannah got up off her booty and grabbed her cell phone.
Four missed calls
Twelve missed texts
Hannah laughed 2 texts from Anne,
Anne- Watch out! Haley’s got something up her sleeve.
Anne- U going 2 Ash’s BBQ?
4 texts from Kaylee:
Kaylee- Ashlynn’s inviting me 2 her BBQ.
Kaylee- Curtis is crying.
Kaylee- GR8, Mona is crying now 2.
Kaylee- Spoke 2 soon-now Jayson is crying 2.
2 texts from Haley:
Haley- I’m @ Luke’s house WOO! And I have my 500 kids w/ me.
Haley- HELP! I’M FRIGGIN’ HUNGRY!!
3 texts from Luke:
Luke- U coming here? I’m cooking.
Luke- HANNAH!!!
Luke- COME ON!
1 text from Jacob:
Jacob- I’m picking u up in 5. B ready.
HONK, HONK! It was Jacob. He was in the pickup truck. Hannah laughed and grabbed Cole. She put him on her hip then drug the girls out. She put Cole in his sede, sedile and put Jess in first. She turned around to grab Jennifer. But she wasn’t their. It was as if she had run away. “Jessica, where is your sister?” Jessica giggled in her sede, sedile and shrugged. “JACOB!” Hannah screamed. “Yeah, babe?” he asked. “Where’s Jennifer?” Hannah screamed. Jacob suddenly got alarmed he dropped his cell phone and darted over to her. “You were supposed to be watching her!” he yelled. Hannah ran over to the swing set out back. Jen wasn’t there. She ran over to the baby pool. She wasn’t wading in it either. Jacob went over to the picnic tavolo where the checkers board was written in. She was sitting their crying. “HANNAH!! Here she is!!” he yelled. Hannah was their in 10 secondi flat. “OH! JEN!” Hannah yelled as she picked up the toddler. “Mommy, mad at me.” Jennifer told her father. “What?” “Mommy, mad at me.” Jennifer repeated.
    Maybe Kaylee hadn’t married anyone. So what?!? It wasn’t her fault it was that girl, Ally’s. But soon after that horrid break-up party Kaylee found herself pregnant. And not only with a baby-with…triplets! She was so scared; she ran away and lived with her grandma in Tennessee. She was 9 months pregnant and gave birth to two stunning baby boys (Curtis and Jayson) and a beautiful baby girl (Mona). Soon, Kaylee went to see her friends. da then they were all nineteen. First she went to see Haley (who was pregnant at the time…with…OMG, Sean!) Haley oohed and aahed over Curtis, Mona, and Jayson. Sean really didn’t care-he was too busy rounding up Haley’s money and the baby toys. It was there first child so they were pretty excited. And then 2 months after Haley gave birth to Elliot Troy Doyle, Sean proposed! But back to Kaylee, she went to see Hannah who was also pregnant with twins. She also loved the triplets. But, still Kaylee hadn’t even told Tucker about his babies.
    Ashlynn might seem all smiles but she was starting to have secondo thoughts on Tucker being here. She had Kaylee their too. But she guessed things would be alright, she had all her best Friends their and her godchildren (Haley’s kids and Hannah’s kids: Haley was the godmother of hers and Sean was godfather of Ash and Luke’s). As Ashlynn entered the room she saw Haley sitting on Luke’s lap (which wasn’t weird, they acted like siblings), and Sean was getting wrapped up in tinfoil da gelsomino and Kat (with the help of Anne). Jordon was playing Lego’s with Andy and Elliot. Anne’s twins, Mia and Joey were sucking on binkies da the highchairs. Her other kid, Lucy was playing with Ian. Adrian was content twisting her big sister, Katlynn’s hair. While Eli was wanting on his mommy’s lap. FUN! Tucker entered and looked at everyone. His face was tear-stained. Although Ashlynn felt bad for him, she told him to help himself to the Cibo lying on the plates in the cucina and he headed strait for the food. “ASHLYNN!” Haley screamed and jumped off Luke’s lap. He screeched because her bony butt hurt like heck! Ashlynn laughed and hugged Haley. “What’s up?” Ashlynn yelled and kissed Luke. “Nothing, your hubby is supposed to be making me a drink.” Haley detto back to Ashlynn. Haley reached in her pocket and got out some tiny rubber animali that had pencil marks, they were ripped and one even had FAT printed on the side. It was the crew. Haley handed Ashlynn the rubber big piggy. Whenever, Haley and Ashlynn were in 5th grade they made up a Bus mostra called, “The Fattie Family” they called it. Ryen was the blue (now almost white) koala named Charles. Haley was Baby Fattie, a small red and yellow parrot. Callista, Haley’s cousin was Charles’ daddy, Conner who was dating Ashlynn’s character, Mrs.Fattie. Cally was coming that night to the cena party for Haley and Ashlynn. Cally had 1 child so far, Marilynn who was 4 and a ½ now. Haley was in Amore with all the kids here so its no surprise that whenever Cally waltzed in with Marilynn and her husband, Tom, Haley picked up Marilynn ASAP! Alex, Cally’s older sis had to come of course, she had 3 kids, Zoë who was 2 and a ½, Cleo who was 2 months, and Cleo’s twin, Victor. Alex was pregnant again, with twins, again!! So yeah, it was a party. Alex came immediately over to her cousin Haley and hugged her.
    Haley ate a cracker with cheese and then took a drink of the white wine. Maybe wine wasn’t so bad after all. She was in the cucina with herself whenever she felt a cold hand on her shoulder. “Hey cutie.” She heard the voice say. She knew it was Sean so she turned around and kissed him strait on the lips. “Hey. What’s up hottie?” He smirked and grabbed her da the waist, “Want another kid, because, I’m not sure if I can keep my hands off you.” I rolled my eyes, “I’m not sure, I already have five…but if te really don’t think te can…” They laughed as he dragged her out to the minivan. The windows in the back were tinted and the tronco was like pitch black so…yeah….


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posted by hgfan5602
I'm up all the time now.
Head up
Shoulders back
Legs slightly apart
Back straight.

I walk into the exam room,
Knowing inside my heart
That the ones who fear
Are the ones who do not succeed.

I sit down.
Confident,
I start my song
Of utmost elegance.

I use all my power
And strength.
I use all the dynamics in the world,
I use everything everyone's brought me.
I use all the good that everyone
Has dato me
In my life.

Time goes slowly by.
I feel myself going along with the beat.
I am entranced in my own song.
It feels better than ever before.

I am done.
I walk over to the judges,
Shaking each hand.
I feel a sense of pride in my heart,
Knowing that I have done it now.
I truly have.
posted by hgfan5602
I am disappointed,
At the way things are moving along.
Why is everyone so private about
Everything?

I am disappointed,
That I have not met my dream yet.
It seems a long way until I will
Catch my dream in the sky.

I am disappointed,
With many people.
Not just me.
But mostly me.

Why am I being so selfish?
Why are other people being so unkind?
Everything seems in ruin,
Including me.

I am sorry that this is the way it must be
Today,
But I know that tomorrow is a new day,
Waiting for all of us to do good deeds.
And do we shall.
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posted by hgfan5602
My name is Matt Downley, and I am a calcio player. I just moved here to New York, and I was just going to try out for the Weston Middle calcio team, when believe it o not, the principal came rushing down the halls and detto that I couldn't play because I am disabled. WHAT THE HECK!!! Okay, I was like, "So here's the deal. I can't play. I can't do anything. What the freak am I supposed to do at this stupid school!!!" But, of course, I didn't have the guts to say that out loud to the principal, so I just muttered and said, "Okay." Lately, I feel like people have been stalking me when I came back from school. Everyday when I go to bed, I feel like people are looming in the shadows above me. I didn't know now, but tonight would be a night of extreme danger.
posted by morganaforever
Full of excitement, Nicole and Ellie arrived at the fairground. They walked through the towering gates, expecting laughter and chatter – but everything remained quiet. No music, no noise, nothing! The place was deserted. A strong gust of wind blew, making them shiver. As they walked on, it began to get darker. Gradually, the sky turned from a bright blue to black. One da one the lights of the fairground flickered on, illuminating the black sky. As they passed da The Haunted Mine, it seemed to be inviting them to have a go. A man clad completely in black was waiting beside the entrance.

“Can...
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posted by candyvtoby511
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Tess is walking late at night with her dog alone, thinking about her parent’s mysterious murderer; why didn’t he kill her as well? What motive did he have to kill them? She ponders over the words her mother spoke in her dying breath; what did she mean that I shouldn’t trust him?...
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 Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture da oro Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
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London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....
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If i get enough commenti i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as animali scurried in the albero tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in da cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, superiore, in alto bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million stella, star and the florescent glow of the moon....
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posted by precious211
“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around te killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the spazio craft had just...
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if te want to convey your thoughts accurately. te also want your Scrivere to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is più annoying than Leggere a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of Scrivere sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
1


Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2


Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes inoltrare, avanti the mind and body of an individual changes for either good o bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years fa da a wise old man that fortold my future. He detto "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's Lost Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him più shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a sicuro, cassetta di sicurezza distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired da some commenti about stuffed animals/plushies on Youtube being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, immagini and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, o thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
To mostra how thw whiirlwind works, let us have an example. During practice for spring track, I noticed...
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posted by Lord_Anubis
If te mates like it, comment, I'll make più if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, te guys! What are te doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, o you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
''You scum really have guts! 5 tall Cani on 1 small...
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posted by dragonsmemory
The Eden Chronicles is the fantasy series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In Scrivere the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead animali and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
The first book, A Little Bit più Than Love, takes place toward the end of Eden's history. Later in the series, I hope to explain the past. Once I get caught up, I will then...
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