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posted by grissomsgirl
This isn't a timeline story Gilbert is three and this is my first try at fanfiction, so please be gentle!

All CSI - Scena del crimine characters owned da CBS except for Grissom Junior, he's mine, I hope!

When I woke up I saw three faces that I knew the other three I didn’t and me being a shy three anno old I panicked, loudly! I cried into Daddy’s neck and shook “whoa Gilbert, what’s the matter baby?” asked Daddy trying his best to soothe me, I started to sniffle and detto in a quiet voice “me frightened, strangers” and I snuggled into Daddy’s body “don’t worry Gilbert they won’t hurt you, trust me and turn around”, when I did Daddy then introduced me to the other strangers, I now know who Auntie Catherine is and my other two Uncles Warrick and Greg they got lots of cuddles from me and I’m a happy Gilbert. Afterwards we had a secret play time together “just don’t tell” and I’ve never heard of this name ever before, I tried to copy Daddy and from the giggles I got it wrong “Eckie, Ickle” I detto “Eckle?” now I’m in a mood folded my arms and frowned at Daddy “no fair Ickle” Mommy burst out laughing and so did the others, “oh my word mini Grissom has a good sense of humour, I’m buying him a joke book!” detto Greg holding his sides in pain ‘well I didn’t find that very funny, I got his name wrong!’ I thought to myself and just stood there waiting for the grown ups to behave themselves.

I waited until they behaved themselves then we had the play time together, ran up and down the break room being chased da Nick, Warrick allowed me to put some ink on his fingers! I even made my own hand picture with everyone’s help, the ink got everywhere and Mommy say’s I need a bath, I’d started to calm down from all the excitement when the door opened and in walked another stranger. The man walked up to Mommy hugged her she was now happy then he turned to look at me and frowned ‘oops what did I do wrong now?’ I thought “and who is this young man?” he asked Daddy “this Jim” and Daddy picked me up “is my son Gilbert” successivo thing I knew he was laying on the floor, “Daddy Daddy Daddy!” I wailed “sorry Daddy” and I sobbed onto Daddy’s shoulder, my Uncles and Aunt came to Jim’s rescue and sat him down on a chair “just in case!” detto Catherine with a smile “where were we?” asked Daddy “oh yes before te fainted spark out on the floor I told te the news that I have a son” Jim just nodded his head in reply “Gilbert meet your Grampa Jim!” detto Daddy with a smile, he put me down and I hopped onto Jim’s lap for a cuddle lots of those! “any più surprises Gil that you’d like to tell me now as I’m sitting down?” I heard Jim say “no Jim just this one!” detto Daddy beaming with pride and that’s how I met Mommy and Daddy’s friends, my other family.
chapter four
music says it all

we were running late the giorno after it had been a great night and da the smile on becs face she enjoyed it too. she tol me last night how tom had asked her out and always liked her but not know what to say.
it was weird in a way talking to becca it was like i knew her, like i knew her from some place but not knowing where.
"hey what do te have first?" i couldn't help asking i wanted to know if she would be in my Musica and i missed her o something
"ermm... art first you?"
"music" she must have heard the exsitment in my voice cause she gave me a queastion mak face....
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posted by HaleyDewit
We're blind to another one's pain
'Cause we refuse to see
We're deaf to another one's cries
'Cause we refuse to hear
We're dumb to another one's comfort request
'Cause we refuse to speak

But our eyes are wide open
To see another one's mistake
Our ears are open
To hear abouth another one's mistakes
And we can speak
To judge about another one's mistakes

We think we know everything
But we don't know anything
We're ready to judge
But we'd better look in the mirror

Making mistakes is proof your human
Turning your back on those who make them, not so much

He who's without sin,cast the first stone
What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

Thy language foul, it bothered me,
But I saw through thy ettiquit.
I had seen thine sincerity.
Our conversations my giorno lit.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee at the very start,
I knew I could not tell my mum.

For hours we would sit and talk.
Secretly I admired thee.
My pain I let thee block.
I wanted to know if thou didst too Amore me.

What hast thou done unto my heart?
Unto my soul what hast become?
When I met thee...
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I would never have thought that I would ever be here again.
But it still had come to that anyway. I was in the first floor of my old school which I have attended four years fa again. It was still the same. Only the doors were painted newly the corridor, the walls. I heard noises from the gymnasium. I circulated to the third floor to look whether the theater group listed there today. I passed da the keep fit room, where I still had had lessons four years fa once and I had got back the feeling for a short moment to be I myself. How it still have been me four years fa and HE was the only one...
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How To Write A Cliffhanger For A Televisione mostra da John Truby via www.FilmCourage.com.
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Writers use sentence fragments for emphasis and other stylistic reasons, but over using incomplete sentences confuses the reader. te also should avoid incomplete sentences in academic o professional writing. The three major components of a complete sentence are a subject, verb and complete idea

Check for Grammatical Completeness



The two basic components of a complete sentence are a subject and a verb. Although these two things don't always make a complete sentence, grammatical completeness is a good place to start to avoid incomplete sentences. The verb is the action that takes place, and...
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posted by Me_Iz_Here
Depressing, COMPLETELY FICTIONAL story I wrote.

“My mother ruined my life.” te hear girls say that all the time. It’s never true. Unless te ask me. My mother truly ruined my life. Not in the way te would expect a sixteen anno old girl to say that. I genuinely meant it.
I remember sobbing that day. When we got back from the doctor, sobbing my eyes out. I hated her. I hated my mother with a passion.
I looked down at my newly flat stomach. I missed the bump there. The bump that I had indicating an unborn child. The child that I loved and vowed to care for. Until my fucking mother made...
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There’s this chick called Princess Alyssia Renesmee III (Alyss). She’s the princess (obviously :). At the start she has a best friend who she’s been Friends with since they were bambini called Charlotte. She ended up being her maidservant though coz her parents were killed. Alyss lives in the castello with her parents the king and Queen (obviously) and boyfriend/ fiancé, James. He keeps knicken off on ‘business’. Alyss doesn’t actually suspect anything, she’s just sad that she never gets to see him. She’s also known him since they were really little, and she’s supposed to marry...
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posted by London_Victoria
 Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Hurtful word's can mean so much but nothing means più than to hear your beautiful word's.
Because when te cry i will too because noone
knows how much i Amore te only me and my heart
do,And it tells me that i would die for you.
When te say i cant take it anymore it surprises me that te mean it because i think it's
beautiful that te would give your cuore to me.
People might say i'm wrong for te but their words dont matter because me and te are different from everyone else.
I know sometimes im not always there for te but i will try my best to tell te the truth because nothing really matters...
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