I know this isn't related to this club but....

Can your read my article??
Actually its chapter 1 and 2 (still a draft):

www.fanpop.com/spots/writing/articles/59837/title/try-...r-2

www.fanpop.com/spots/writing/articles/59694/title/try-...r-1


The titolo is Try My life.
Its not that really long.
It will keep te reading.

Tell me what te think.
Thank you!