Need help with Scrivere

Hi
I really want to be a real writer one day, so any help would be appreciated.

I have postato some of my stories on other Scrivere club and received little o no comments.
Now I post most of my stories on a club I made called ITF's stories.

I write mostly about animali like mice and squirrels that live in a medieval setting (kind of like the Redwall books) but also wild Gatti (like Warriors) and wolves.

Now I post most of my stories on a club I made called ITF's stories.

I would be grateful for any help o commenti (good o bad).