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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. da no means am I forcing te to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless te truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before te start posting. It can be as little as a bio, o as big as an entire articolo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no più than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he o she is in, can pull out another trick out of his o her hat.
4. If te absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his o her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely random and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when te have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the successivo giorno you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own o is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the recente outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, o claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If te must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, o so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if te do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot o stabbed in the heart, then pop up minuti later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull o flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to o dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to o dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created da you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing o potential character is a Mary Sue, o if te suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, te can take link. If te want, te can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case te were curious, which te probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all te want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, da no means do te have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by MafiaYJ
Mafia sat alone on a rooftop, watching through binoculars, her target in a window across from her. The target wasn't aware of her of course, but some one else was. Mafia checked the time on her watch with a sigh. It was past midnight, but she needed this guy, preferably dead. It was easier to carry dead weight than live bait. Especially if he struggled. Sadly, Mafia had been right about one thing; her target would't be leaving the building any time soon. And she needed to have him before sundown. She sighed and tucked her red hair under her hat and pulled the collare up, if she was spotted in...
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posted by SilverWings13
“Lesson learned: Avoid wearing cashmere on drug busts,” Vika stated as she glared as the culprit of her annoyance- a short navy dress and the red staining the white collar.
“Did te try hydrogen peroxide?” a voice behind her suggested. Of course the girl recognized his mocking Londra accent. She attempted to sound miffed at his sneaking up on her unpronounced, but she could do little about the blush that darkened her cheeks.
“What are te doing in a lady’s bedroom?” she demanded from him, hoping to fluster him. But when she spun to face him, he was leaning leisurely in the doorway...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Oxpaha
Oxpaha
Name: Asmundur “Des” Celos
Alias: Oxpaha
Occupation: Hero/Trainer
Powers: A powerful set of unbreakable, inescapable, invulnerable handcuffs
Skills/talents: Basic strada, via fighting, all kinds of arsenal, a little bit of martial arts
Appearance: Brown/black hair and dark blue eyes
History:Des has a very strange history. His dad was a cop. His mother was a nurse. Because of their work, he saw little of them and più of his cousin Reyna Jackson. He is older than she is, but the two grew up playing together. His Father was Latin-Russian which is why his name isn't American. His father was shot on duty...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
Name: Melody
Hero Name: Lotus
Nickname: Melly
Appearance: Dark green hair and eyes.
Age: 16 yrs.
Abilities: Melody controls plants. Her hair can turn into veins and grow fiori da her control. She can communicate with plants and grow them da her will.
Relations:Ashley is her best Friend. Friends with Nate, Phfi, Jaivus, Kaya, Akash, Koda, Akash and Ashley.
Attitude: Friendly, caring.
History&Past: Melody had a rush childhood she was abused sexual, verbal and physical da her alcoholic Father. He also did this to her mother causing her fair him so she never reported the abuse to her nor her daughter...
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Martina blinded a few times before she was able to full open her eyes, her head was pounding from the mind-blast. She sat up, as she did she felt a paining sensation in her waist she grabbed hold on it noticing a slit and blood. She looked around but Nate was no where in sight. She stood up wavering a little then made her way down the mountain to the cave.

As she approached the cave her entire body ached più so did the slit on her waist, she continued to waver until she enter the cave. She fell to her knee from exhaustion Superboy noticed the smeraldo haired and rush to her shouting out her...
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posted by GlitterPuff
October 3rd, 1999

"Mommy! Daddy!"

"Rene, calm down."

"But, I wanna go in the castle!"

"We will go to the castle."

"Can we go now?"

"No, we'll go a little later. Look at the ticket line."

"Pwease daddy?"

"How about we get some ice cream first sweetie."

Okey dokey!" The father picked his daughter up da the waist and sat her on his shoulders. She wrapped her arms around his neck, not tight enough to choke him; but enough to hold on.

"Don't let her fall," the mother detto cautiously.

"I won't." Rene giggled as her dad bounced her up and down on their way to the ice cream stand.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

About...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Haru
Haru
Warning te now; don't expect anything from the original character based off of the pics. Some things I will mimic but I give full credit to the ideas I use to those who created the original character. I promise, I'm not stealing. And I always use Anime pics anyways. Just an FYI. Ok. Enjoy!!



Name: Haru
Alias: Yin/Yang
Occupation: Varied
Powers: Acrobatics, Martial Arts Expert, Can turn every giorno objects into weapons, Staff, Nun-chucks, Daggers, Shuriken, Sais
History: Haru is not his real name. He uses it as an alias to his real name due to a traumatic past he has all but forgotten. Sometime during...
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posted by DiscordYJ
 0-0
0-0
Inspiration? Monster da Imagine Draghi

Does it hurt? Yes..
Does it mock me? Yes..
Does it scare people? Yes..
Does it hurt people? Yes..
Does it cause pain? Yes..
Does it want her? Yes..
Does it want to hurt her? Yes..
Will I let it? Never..

This thing doesn't want me to love, its selfish. Blade. I'd kill it before it touches her. She makes it angry, uncomfortable, envious. If I gave it a chance, which I never will, it would kill her, rip her apart, and leave nothing left. She's scared, though she says she's not. I can feel the fear deep within her; I wish she wasn't, but it is glad she's...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Whisperer
Whisperer
Name: Nate
Hero Name: Whisperer
Powers: Nate has the powers to communicate with animals, shape-shift into any animal he chooses and also has the power to make others understand animal once he is near to then. Telepathic.
Age:16 yrs.
Skills Combat fighter.
Relations: Adopted brother to Phfi. Friends with Melody, Kaya, Akash, Martina, Koda.
Likes: People who respects authorities, tigers, hawks.
Dislikes: Ashley 'cause he thinks she just a spoiled brat, Jaivus 'cause he is a Beetle.
Attitude: flirtation, protective, Law abiding, proud
Statue: Creatian.
History&Past: Nate/Whisperer is a Creatian...
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posted by GlitterPuff
"Get back!" She yelled as she continuously pulled the trigger. No one moved. "I said, get back!" The large mass of people ran back into their homes as the red head defended them. Bullets flew from everywhere, not even touching Rene.Something was keeping her safe; but no one knew what. She kept shooting over and over, but it was no use. A large group of men grabbed her and pinned her to the ground. She continued to shoot, blasting half of one of the men's heads off, causing him to fall to the ground with a puddle going around his head. Eventually, they threw the gun out of her hand and knocked...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 mysterious blue head
mysterious blue head
Aquapoint and Artemis aimed their arrows at the girl.
"We don't wanna hard you." Sparkfire detto smirking, as she putted out an unusually spear. The boy slowly crawled down from the bacheca and stood on the other side of the hallway surrounding the girls.
"Mafia te got your target right?" Artemis asked at which Mafia nodded yes.
"You and Aquapoint?" Mafia asked, sounding if they had already access their situation. Artemis and Aquapoint looked at each other at which Mafia smirked. Artemis switched directions suddenly and simultaneously both archers release their arrows. The two delinquents dodged...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
Name: Ariel Saskia Monroe

Occupation: Hero and Member of the X-Men

Hero name: Bubble Blast

Age: 16

Date of Birth: 6th April 1997

Type: Mutant, Human

Nationality: American

Hair: Platinum Blonde, straight, side parting but no side fringe, and it is also really really long (to the bottom of her spine)

Eyes: Cloudy, matt royal blue

Powers and/or ability’s:
Can create orbs/bubbles of energy o out of anything natural which includes:
-Lightning and other types of weather.
-Wood, metal and diamond.
-energy force field bubbles.
-basic combat skills
-Rather Flexible body.

Weaknesses:
-Too many blows to the body.
-Inhibiter...
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Sorry this is a short one.


He glanced at the clock. She's supposed to be here da now... His hand reached out to grab his cup. The warmth of the coffee released the tension in his body, letting his mind relax and not worry. As soon as the campana, bell on the bar door rang, the tension raced back when he saw her. Her red hair hair swung back and forth on her back as she went to get a drink. She turned her head to Nye and smiled. His green eyes grew tense; but he managed a wave.As she came back with a nice cold birra in her hand, the boys body stiffened with fear. She grabbed the chair, pulled it out; and...
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 Alex AKA the Distraction
Alex AKA the Distraction
(well part two enjoy)

They walk in to the back of the stage and whisper in hush tones
"you know the plan so get ready" stated Alex before walking to the door heading to the stage
"well lets go brain" Ajax detto jokingly before climbing onto the ceiling his black cloths blending in with the shadows
"right then pinky" Kane laughs straighting his tie and walking to unisciti the other people dancing.

Climbing through the vent was not his style but sometime te gotta do what te gotta do so he continued crawling through it. Looking through the vents he saw the people dancing, Canto wasn't what he'd...
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posted by SilverWings13
When Nic dropped his arms, Bentley nearly tripped getting to the bed. Aryess blinked several times in the bright light and looked up to her boyfriend. She grinned meekly as their eyes met for the first time in months.

Alek's struggled for air as his cuore kick-started. It took a moment for his breathing to return to normal, and da then, Tara had rushed over to him and thrown her arms around his neck. She sobbed with relief into his shoulder, and he shut his eyes , wrapping his arms around her torso. 

3 months later...

"Guess this is it."
"Not necessarily," she disagreed. 
"Italy's a long way from...
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posted by GlitterPuff
 Rose-Skull Civvies
Rose-Skull Civvies
OKAY! If any of te have ever watched Torchwood on BBC America o Netflix o wherever, te will scream bloody murder when te realize what episode she's from!

Name: Unknown

Alias: Rose-Skull

Appearance: Medium length black hair, fair skin, about 5 feet 7 inches, silver colored eyes (sometimes with red), a small tattoo of a demon on her wrist

Personality: She’s very nice to people she’s about to kill and acts sweet and trustworthy. Any other time, she is bitchy, mean, sarcastic, and rude.

Civvies: Black wide neck crop top, black jeans with grey suspenders hanging, black knee high high heeled...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
Ashley and the young beetle stood at the bacheca as they both waited for her to recover from what she had saw. "You ok?" He asked, looking at her. She shook her head yes gently letting go of his arms.
"Do te know where to look of my sister?" She asked, and the boy smirk.
"Come over here." he said, moving to the table. Ashley followed, the boy when on one side of the tavolo and Ashley stayed on the other. He pointed to an area that was circled off in red mark.
"How do te she's here."
"I followed her there." He replied.
"So te have a plan on rescuing Kaya?" She asked.
"Of course I do." He replied, with...
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posted by GlitterPuff
Name: Terpsichore Morison

Sex: Female

Age: 15

Appearance: Long rosa hair, blue eyes, fair skin, tall, skinny, wears Leggere glasses when needed

Personality: Sweet as candy, very paranoid about people (cause she thinks they’ll kill her), a little spacey, and shy around new people

Civvies: A blue tank top, gray sweater, jeggings, sport sneakers, small backpack, and an assortment of bracelets and earrings

Weapons: A handheld gun (usually in bra o her bag)

Skills: None

Powers: None

Past: Terpsichore lived in a very harsh crime filled neighborhood in New York City. Everywhere she turned, there were guns,...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
The lupo charged at full speed to the trio. They all looked at each other not knowing whether it was headed for them o was it just pasting through, but there was no time to figure that out. They separated making room for the monster. The lupo pasted but suddenly turned around. It howled and stood ground. The lupo was all black with grey eyes and a much più fuzzy tail than other wolfs. It howled once più moving from side to side, it stopped, stared of a bit then suddenly charged at Aisling. Aisling pulled out an Arrow and drew her bow, running side ways she shot at the wolf. It dodged, jumping...
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posted by MafiaYJ
 Time keeps running off with out her..
Time keeps running off with out her..
Woman eternal,
She cannot die,
And ever giorno of her years,
She shall cry.
Woman out of time,
Who does not age,
Who harbors fear,
And harbors rage.
Angry daughter,
Along at last,
Time goes da slow,
But people go da fast.
Heavyhearted,
Wandering soul,
Awaiting death,
To take its toll.
A woman eternal,
May have no heart,
For it may end,
Before it may start.
Woman eternal,
Who cannot die,
Only one who calls on death,
And doesn't lie.

This is a poem about Babylon in case te wouldn't tell..and now i'm babbling because my articolo needs to be longer..ugh. Anyway, I hope te liked it. So tell me what te think.