(This is based on my first fanfiction "Continuation of Burning Low" I made my own character named Emily Hallison she a human from the town Goldlion)
(it was just another regular giorno and as usual pb was kidnapped da the ice king and as usual finn and jake were running and trying to save her)
Finn: let her go Barf breath!(running)
Jake: yeah she'll probably faint because of your breath haha (running too)
Ice King:What?! (stopping in mid-air) I'll have te know that I brush my teeth 3 times a day!!
Finn: And I'll have te know I'm gonna kick your butt!!(doing a flying kick on ice Kings face)
Emily's POV
(its Sembreak school doesn't start for the successivo 2 weeks. It was just a normal giorno in Gollion the trees were decorated with the most wonderful shades of arancia, arancio and red, just as I was halfway home Amanda Tuffwood the most popolare girl in school and her group blocked my path)
Emily: What do te want Amanda?
Amanda: Just a little something Ms. Jayloon gave you.
Emily: te mean the lead role for the play?
Amanda: Good girl, now I want te to tell Ms . Jayloon that te don't want the role and say that she should give it to me.
Emily : What no way!!(she detto furiously) I'm not like te little maid that will do everything te want!
Amanda:(she glared at her evil-like) Fine I guess i'll have to take it da force , girls!! (then two of her accomplices charged after her but dodge all of them and ran and ran until she could run no more)
(then she found a cottage with The name "Ooo Royal" she saw that the door was left open and knowing that Amanda and her Friends will catch up to her soon she had no choice but go in the old cottage and wait. When she turned around the cottage was rather small and dusty but what caught her eye was the words in red on the bacheca it read "The gate of the Land of Ooo is upon you, say it once say it twice and it will open for you)
Emily: (she began Leggere it) The gate to The Land of Ooo is upon,say it once say it twice and it open for you
(in an instant a potal sucked her into the Ooo)
Finn's POV
(they finally defeated Ice King and freed pb when a portal opened and something came out of it and it landed on Finn)
Emily: ahh off!(as she landed on finn and they both fell down on the snow)
Finn and Emily: Owww (both raising there heads and at once there eyes met)
to be continued-
(well tell me what te think about this, I know its not [perfect but I Amore it, ohh and tell me what te think about Emily)
(it was just another regular giorno and as usual pb was kidnapped da the ice king and as usual finn and jake were running and trying to save her)
Finn: let her go Barf breath!(running)
Jake: yeah she'll probably faint because of your breath haha (running too)
Ice King:What?! (stopping in mid-air) I'll have te know that I brush my teeth 3 times a day!!
Finn: And I'll have te know I'm gonna kick your butt!!(doing a flying kick on ice Kings face)
Emily's POV
(its Sembreak school doesn't start for the successivo 2 weeks. It was just a normal giorno in Gollion the trees were decorated with the most wonderful shades of arancia, arancio and red, just as I was halfway home Amanda Tuffwood the most popolare girl in school and her group blocked my path)
Emily: What do te want Amanda?
Amanda: Just a little something Ms. Jayloon gave you.
Emily: te mean the lead role for the play?
Amanda: Good girl, now I want te to tell Ms . Jayloon that te don't want the role and say that she should give it to me.
Emily : What no way!!(she detto furiously) I'm not like te little maid that will do everything te want!
Amanda:(she glared at her evil-like) Fine I guess i'll have to take it da force , girls!! (then two of her accomplices charged after her but dodge all of them and ran and ran until she could run no more)
(then she found a cottage with The name "Ooo Royal" she saw that the door was left open and knowing that Amanda and her Friends will catch up to her soon she had no choice but go in the old cottage and wait. When she turned around the cottage was rather small and dusty but what caught her eye was the words in red on the bacheca it read "The gate of the Land of Ooo is upon you, say it once say it twice and it will open for you)
Emily: (she began Leggere it) The gate to The Land of Ooo is upon,say it once say it twice and it open for you
(in an instant a potal sucked her into the Ooo)
Finn's POV
(they finally defeated Ice King and freed pb when a portal opened and something came out of it and it landed on Finn)
Emily: ahh off!(as she landed on finn and they both fell down on the snow)
Finn and Emily: Owww (both raising there heads and at once there eyes met)
to be continued-
(well tell me what te think about this, I know its not [perfect but I Amore it, ohh and tell me what te think about Emily)
A very intersesting,fan - made,incompleted comic Press "CTRL" and key "+" to see clearly
hello diary this is me finn alot of people being fighting over who would i go with even i,can't choose, i'll think about it hmm how about fp shes hot and at my age but i cant live being always burned, PB too old for me if only there were no limone grab she can be 13 forever,marcilline have the same like of adventures but she looks like young but i know she's 1000 years old and have no likes on me hmm who should i choose hmm.......jake:hey finn what are te doing!!Finn:NOTHING jake:is that your diary finn: NO well whats in there finn:I ALREADY detto NOTHING jake:*stares on finn*........... works for me good night finn Finn:shooo that was a close one and dear diary jake almost see my diary good night.
Just saying that for such a good mostra with so many fan their are only a hand full of people who actually are active on this site :( which I think is a real shame:/ (these people will know who I'm talking about..) Not saying that everyone has to be so in your face with forum and risposte 'cause everyones different and some people don't feel so passionate about the cartoon I love. What I'm trying to say is that this site hasn't got much spirit although it should be truly legendary!! and I take my hat off to the few people keeping it alive! :D
Thanks for reading
Raymanthelegendary a.k.a. Josh
Thanks for reading
Raymanthelegendary a.k.a. Josh
