Alpha e Omega Article: why chapter 4

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posted by lonehumphrey

Please suscripe and tell me how I could get better da the way this takes place the successivo morning after chapter3

When Humphrey woke up the successivo morining on the divano
He saw Kate on the other side of the divano sound asleep. Wow whisperd Humphrey your so beautiful but an aditude. He got up as slowly as he could but still he woke up Kate o so he thought. I heard what te detto Kate detto what do te mean. When te detto I'm beautiful. Humphrey was emberrised so much te could see he was blushung through his fur. but I'm too old for te what do te mean your a little older then me but. Still its a no Humphrey walked away sad and still scared of yesterdays events.

When Nathan woke up he greeted Kate with a nice comferting head rub. Oh right there. When Humphrey saw Nathan he didn't notice his tail was between his legs. What's wrong Humphrey he detto what oh nothing.Humphrey come here. Why? You'll see. So Humphrey walked to Nathan still scared Nathan picked Humphrey up and started petting him and playing with him when Kate noticed she joined in and they all stated playing around.
when they were done they covered nathans face with playful licks for a secondo Humphrey liked Kate's toung on accident oh sorry Kate. Its ok she said.
hope te liked it suscripe again please

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lonehumphrey Sorry for spelling mistakes and punch errors

MarvelousAlpha Great job, but here is a tip: When a character talks use the (") symbol. Example: "Hello how are you?" It makes it way easier for the reader to know what they are saying. Great article! :P

lonehumphrey Thanks its hard writing on a ipodand a kindle

kateandme I know what you mean i am using a DSIXL most of the time. i think the samething using the " " marks will help.

lonehumphrey K thanks for the advice I started it on the other chapters

kateandme np!

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Balto, the Hell of Nome, Chapter Four

posted by Alue26

Heya folks, here's the fourth chapter of the Hell of Nome. I know, I detto I'll be ready tommorow, but I like my chapters medium, not long. But still, Enjoy, Comment, Fan!!

Chapter 4: Events after events.

The sunbeams once again came trough the windows of the parental house of Jenna and Ewan, and Jenna was the first to awake, feeling nervous, because Martin would stop always at this point, where she mourned in herself and where her mother would screech to her because she didn’t came on time for her breakfast, and that was a death sin in the eyes of her mother, and then, after she did managed...