Hello everyone! I just came up with an awesome story! It call Lone Wolf: A New Pack. It when a Young lupo travels alone da hurting the pack leader AKA his father. Now he travels alone try to find a pack an he founds one. But will he able to unisciti in the pack and what will happen if he does make it in the pack and what happen when he dosen't? Find out here, right now! (And why my name is Stars. I Will tell te when I feel like te guys want to hear it.) Here is Part One! hope te enjoy.
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WANRING: Please read Rating
Violence: 2/3
Sex: 0/3
Language: 1/3
Ch.1 Lone Wolf
First POV: Stars
It was a cold night, little snow fall and windy. I was in a pack, but got kick out o what everybody call it, Abandon. The snow storm got worser as I keep walking, I try to keep up but I fall because of the wind. Then Ice started to fall, making my pelliccia cover with frost o ice which can make a bald spot on my pelliccia o make my skin numb. Hi, my name is Stars, It a weird name but I will tell te later. My Disavowed, (Abandon), pack left me because I hurt my father. It was a fight, He call me a whimp Alpha lupo (Which I am an Alpha Wolf). I bite his neck hard. He survive but he and the Co-Leader detto "Your out of this pack." So here I am in the cold weather almost morning and cold like Im about to die. Then I heard voices around me. A few glowing eyes and crack of sticks. I thought it was ice landing but it was, Louder. "Hello?" I detto like Im brave, but inside of me, I was scared. "Im not affraid. Come after me." The noises became louder and louder untill a White breed lupo with Blonde hair jump after me. She jump on superiore, in alto on me and started to choke me. "Who are you?" She detto like she was the leader. "Tell me!" I could not tell her because I coudn't talk. I try to tell her but all that I try to detto was "ACK!" "WHO ARE YOU!?!?" She detto again. "Sta-" "Stan?" I try to talk but all was "Stat." "Sti?" Then with a loud voice I finally detto my name. "STARS! My name is st- Stars." She turn her head and stop choking me. I gasp a big air and kept doing it like I Lost my soul. "That is a weird name." "Just something that I was born with." I said, still breathing hard. "What... What is your name" I said. I finally stop breathing hard and breathing easy. She flip her hair behind her and detto "My name is Katie." "Well... That is a-" Then I heard a howl. It was somebody that I didn't know. Then Katie detto out of nowhere. "That my Dad, Are te a Lone Wolf." She detto curiosity. "Yes." "Hold on." Then she howl for no reason. But her howl was the most beautiful thing ever. I thought I was dreaming, but I was in reality. She put one of her paw onto my sholder. "You... te wanna try to unisciti my pack?" She detto like we were in love. "Um... Sure." Then she grab my paw and just said. "Act normal." I did. Then as we were walking everybody look at me weird. There chin was red, all of them. Katie turn at me and detto "Were almost there." Her chin was also red. I stared to freak out and just go with the flow. As we were walking, people were still looking at me and taking about me. As I look at the den. Nerves went all over in my body.
Ch.2 The Leader
I look at the tana, den looking all over, then da accident I bump the leader da the chest falling da my back and looking at him. He look like an angry bull. "KATIE!? Who the Fuck is this wolf, and why did te bring him to me!?" He detto in a very deep voice. He has a scar at his right eyes. His eyes was still there but look a little weird. "Dad, I want te to me this lupo Stars. He a Lone lupo and I been thinking he can unisciti the... te know... The pack. He looking at me deeply and said. "Jen! Do the shot." Jen was The Co-Leader Helper For the Leader AKA Katie's Dad. " The what?" I said. Then she took my middle figured and stab it into the little machine. I bite my other hand and it showed My profile. "He an Abandon Wolf. He from Tom tribe." He look at me and said, "What breed lupo are you!?" "Umm... Black wolf?" I detto nervous. "ALPHA o OMEGA!?" "Alpha..." I detto like a whip. "So your an Alpha? Go hunt those three deer. I will think te will be in the pack o not. Then I heard from Katie was "We need più alpha in the pa..." I didn't here the rest. I kill Two mostly at the same time. The last one I had to run for an minute. But the deer trip over the dead deer. I killed all three deer. Then as I came in His face was like "Im not letting in the pack." But his face change to a shock face. He snap back to reality and detto to me in a happy voice. "We need più alpha in the pack. We only have 6 girls and 3 Boys. Rest are Omegas o Alpha that Injured o Pregnant." He pause and said... "Your in the pack." I was amazed. Im in an better o worser pack. Katie smile at me and give me a thumbs up. "Here put this on your chin It just to let us know your in the pack." He give it to me and it was red. It was in a small container, I really didn't know what it was until I fondere, c'era un odore it. It was Blood! I didn't know who it was from but I put the little container of blood in my hand and wipe it on my chin. It was gross because from another body, that disgusting. Thinking where the blood was at. Then Katie's Dad said. "It 7:00 AM. te guys need to hunt a lot for the feast tonight. Get the Alpha Squad Pack 1. We need to get ready. Katie howl for ASP1 (Alpha Squad Pack 1)" Then she howl. I was in a happy mood because she howled so beautiful! "Tell the pack go easy on the new guy." Which was me. As we went out in the tana, den I detto to Katie. "Thank te very much for letting me in the pack." "Your Welcome." She detto happily. "No Really, I mean it." Then she didn't talk because the ASP1 was here. giorno 1 of an new pack. Lets hope this will be good.
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END OF CHAPTER 1 AND 2.
How did te think? Well I hope te like the story!
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WANRING: Please read Rating
Violence: 2/3
Sex: 0/3
Language: 1/3
Ch.1 Lone Wolf
First POV: Stars
It was a cold night, little snow fall and windy. I was in a pack, but got kick out o what everybody call it, Abandon. The snow storm got worser as I keep walking, I try to keep up but I fall because of the wind. Then Ice started to fall, making my pelliccia cover with frost o ice which can make a bald spot on my pelliccia o make my skin numb. Hi, my name is Stars, It a weird name but I will tell te later. My Disavowed, (Abandon), pack left me because I hurt my father. It was a fight, He call me a whimp Alpha lupo (Which I am an Alpha Wolf). I bite his neck hard. He survive but he and the Co-Leader detto "Your out of this pack." So here I am in the cold weather almost morning and cold like Im about to die. Then I heard voices around me. A few glowing eyes and crack of sticks. I thought it was ice landing but it was, Louder. "Hello?" I detto like Im brave, but inside of me, I was scared. "Im not affraid. Come after me." The noises became louder and louder untill a White breed lupo with Blonde hair jump after me. She jump on superiore, in alto on me and started to choke me. "Who are you?" She detto like she was the leader. "Tell me!" I could not tell her because I coudn't talk. I try to tell her but all that I try to detto was "ACK!" "WHO ARE YOU!?!?" She detto again. "Sta-" "Stan?" I try to talk but all was "Stat." "Sti?" Then with a loud voice I finally detto my name. "STARS! My name is st- Stars." She turn her head and stop choking me. I gasp a big air and kept doing it like I Lost my soul. "That is a weird name." "Just something that I was born with." I said, still breathing hard. "What... What is your name" I said. I finally stop breathing hard and breathing easy. She flip her hair behind her and detto "My name is Katie." "Well... That is a-" Then I heard a howl. It was somebody that I didn't know. Then Katie detto out of nowhere. "That my Dad, Are te a Lone Wolf." She detto curiosity. "Yes." "Hold on." Then she howl for no reason. But her howl was the most beautiful thing ever. I thought I was dreaming, but I was in reality. She put one of her paw onto my sholder. "You... te wanna try to unisciti my pack?" She detto like we were in love. "Um... Sure." Then she grab my paw and just said. "Act normal." I did. Then as we were walking everybody look at me weird. There chin was red, all of them. Katie turn at me and detto "Were almost there." Her chin was also red. I stared to freak out and just go with the flow. As we were walking, people were still looking at me and taking about me. As I look at the den. Nerves went all over in my body.
Ch.2 The Leader
I look at the tana, den looking all over, then da accident I bump the leader da the chest falling da my back and looking at him. He look like an angry bull. "KATIE!? Who the Fuck is this wolf, and why did te bring him to me!?" He detto in a very deep voice. He has a scar at his right eyes. His eyes was still there but look a little weird. "Dad, I want te to me this lupo Stars. He a Lone lupo and I been thinking he can unisciti the... te know... The pack. He looking at me deeply and said. "Jen! Do the shot." Jen was The Co-Leader Helper For the Leader AKA Katie's Dad. " The what?" I said. Then she took my middle figured and stab it into the little machine. I bite my other hand and it showed My profile. "He an Abandon Wolf. He from Tom tribe." He look at me and said, "What breed lupo are you!?" "Umm... Black wolf?" I detto nervous. "ALPHA o OMEGA!?" "Alpha..." I detto like a whip. "So your an Alpha? Go hunt those three deer. I will think te will be in the pack o not. Then I heard from Katie was "We need più alpha in the pa..." I didn't here the rest. I kill Two mostly at the same time. The last one I had to run for an minute. But the deer trip over the dead deer. I killed all three deer. Then as I came in His face was like "Im not letting in the pack." But his face change to a shock face. He snap back to reality and detto to me in a happy voice. "We need più alpha in the pack. We only have 6 girls and 3 Boys. Rest are Omegas o Alpha that Injured o Pregnant." He pause and said... "Your in the pack." I was amazed. Im in an better o worser pack. Katie smile at me and give me a thumbs up. "Here put this on your chin It just to let us know your in the pack." He give it to me and it was red. It was in a small container, I really didn't know what it was until I fondere, c'era un odore it. It was Blood! I didn't know who it was from but I put the little container of blood in my hand and wipe it on my chin. It was gross because from another body, that disgusting. Thinking where the blood was at. Then Katie's Dad said. "It 7:00 AM. te guys need to hunt a lot for the feast tonight. Get the Alpha Squad Pack 1. We need to get ready. Katie howl for ASP1 (Alpha Squad Pack 1)" Then she howl. I was in a happy mood because she howled so beautiful! "Tell the pack go easy on the new guy." Which was me. As we went out in the tana, den I detto to Katie. "Thank te very much for letting me in the pack." "Your Welcome." She detto happily. "No Really, I mean it." Then she didn't talk because the ASP1 was here. giorno 1 of an new pack. Lets hope this will be good.
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END OF CHAPTER 1 AND 2.
How did te think? Well I hope te like the story!
also, i'm sorry if i sound like i'm being repetitive about this, but i just wanted to get it off my chest
1) the animazione in Dino Digs was sometimes better to look at than in Norm of the North
2) Dino Digs kept its gas humor and fart/piss jokes at a minimum, and honestly, it did have some funny bits (when Norm of the North had NONE of it)
3) at least - at the very least - Kate, Humphrey and the pups are decent main characters te can route for (unlike Norm)
4) there's no Brent o Agnes, o Freida and Fran this time around. as for Amy, she was passable (aside from her HIDEOUS design)
5) Dino Digs at least knew when to stop being crazy and nonsensical, so that the audience can take a breath. Norm of the North NEVER stopped being nonsensical and retarded
1) the animazione in Dino Digs was sometimes better to look at than in Norm of the North
2) Dino Digs kept its gas humor and fart/piss jokes at a minimum, and honestly, it did have some funny bits (when Norm of the North had NONE of it)
3) at least - at the very least - Kate, Humphrey and the pups are decent main characters te can route for (unlike Norm)
4) there's no Brent o Agnes, o Freida and Fran this time around. as for Amy, she was passable (aside from her HIDEOUS design)
5) Dino Digs at least knew when to stop being crazy and nonsensical, so that the audience can take a breath. Norm of the North NEVER stopped being nonsensical and retarded