Lilly

Okay.

So here I go.

KingAzxoll mentioned the words "real review" when requesting this of me. Generally all I ever get called is a "hypercrite review" and other less then inspiring shit.

But personally one of my highest issues of this story. Is not havong the attention span for such a long story. So I skimmed though it. And read some of the comments.

I think I have enough information, to review it the best I still can.

There's a character called King. See, THAT'S a lupo name.. Well. Not really actually. But least it's better then Runt and Stinky.

Seriously though. Someone take that MLP name "blueblood"....

Summary: What I think happened when Kate and Humphrey named their three new pups.

A/N: Just a little idea that popped into my head, enjoy!

Naming The Pups - TheChriZ1995

The sun shined up in the sky as another summer giorno passed by, clouds rolled da and birds sung, everything was calm and peaceful. However for a family of Lupi in the united pack this giorno was truly special because today three new pups have been introduced to the world. Winston and Eve along with Garth and Lilly had all gathered in the tana, den Humphrey and Kate shared to whiteness the birth of their new additions to their family.

Now...

CHAPTER 6

As the couple sang I hummed to the rythm and tapped my paw to the beat.Garth was still sleeping,with sunglasses on.I brushed my bangs over my eye again,im used to that.Winston sayed he would pray for me,that made me feel better.I wanted to cry though I missed my family.Mostly Kate.Trees past and I heard the couple say they would stop in 10 minutes.Which was good I needed to use the bathroom.I looked at Garth he seemed like he was having a nightmare beacause he was running on the floor.I jumped off the thing i slept on and nuzzled him,careful enough to not get clawed.He stopped with...

Eight's face was Frozen in a state of panic and fear. Stern had gone limp now, he lay there on the cold dirt. Eight didn't have enough sense about him even to notice whether o not Stern was even breathing. He just stared for a moment. But he didn't have long before the giant orso was right behind him, signified da releasing a roar that shook Eight to his very core. His nerves each gained a heightened sense of feeling from the massive amount of adrenaline his cuore now pumped through his system. It was as though he could feel his skin from the inside, every sposta he made was più sensitive,...