Hi, this is my first fanfic, so please commento (by the way this is a story about Proteus and Kida)Sorry for my spelling.
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man te look like your in a coma." detto Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" detto Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake te up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." detto Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." detto Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. te know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" detto Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see te up! I need te to do something for me." detto the king. "Anything for te father. What do te need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to unisciti Syracuse. So, te will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do te want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect te two to be on that barca and on your way in an half an hour." detto the king. So, half an ora later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank te to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man te look like your in a coma." detto Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" detto Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake te up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." detto Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." detto Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. te know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" detto Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see te up! I need te to do something for me." detto the king. "Anything for te father. What do te need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to unisciti Syracuse. So, te will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do te want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect te two to be on that barca and on your way in an half an hour." detto the king. So, half an ora later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank te to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)