o.k. i finally have a new entry (yay) well ive improved on my Scrivere so lets get to it,
so scar and raven ran through the corridors but stopped when they saw one perfectly healthy human. "h-hey will te s-save me, i h-have n-no idea what happened, but m-my head hurts and now i'm in a prison that is disturbing, they aren't even huma-, y-you are one of them. GET AWAY! te wont hurt me t-the bars, there indestructible! yah te cant hu-" CLINK! the bars slid up and then scar took a step inoltrare, avanti and detto "whatever filthy scum te are, i'm on your side, now get over here o ill" scar stopped because raven shoved him aside "skim, o scar i cant remember, this boy is human" "oh, is he te rank?" "what uh, i'm not going to answer that, but i think i remember him, i cant think of wha-" "ALERT! GAURDS FOUND DEAD AT CELL 11947356 REQUESTING BACKUP FROM BRANCH 284 THIS IS NOT A DRILL ELIMINATE THE INTRUDERS, DONT SPARE THEM" "oh cr--" scar detto grabbing the boy with his free hand because he thought he can shoot with one hand "RUN! and the started sprinting down the halls while raven killed half a dozen guards without missing A shot, scar started to shoot but he underestimated the pistole recoil and it flew out of his hand. the gun acted as a flare would and più guards came at the secondo the gun hit the floor, wall, he didn't remember. the guards finally surrounded them and then raven detto under her voice " grab my leg" so scar did hesitantly with the boy in his other hand. "good bye" raven detto then the flew up to the vents. "grappling hook, comes in handy." then the guards started shooting the ceiling like the they were tad poles in a Olympic sized swimming pool, the scurried along. "ugh man this is tiny". then they came to an end, the vent being of cheap, flimsy metal, under all there wait it dented, creaked then broke. "what do yah know, were at the flight deck" raven detto then scar, who was on his head went "well i thought the pod was small"
there! done finished the story. how do te like that as a comeback
so scar and raven ran through the corridors but stopped when they saw one perfectly healthy human. "h-hey will te s-save me, i h-have n-no idea what happened, but m-my head hurts and now i'm in a prison that is disturbing, they aren't even huma-, y-you are one of them. GET AWAY! te wont hurt me t-the bars, there indestructible! yah te cant hu-" CLINK! the bars slid up and then scar took a step inoltrare, avanti and detto "whatever filthy scum te are, i'm on your side, now get over here o ill" scar stopped because raven shoved him aside "skim, o scar i cant remember, this boy is human" "oh, is he te rank?" "what uh, i'm not going to answer that, but i think i remember him, i cant think of wha-" "ALERT! GAURDS FOUND DEAD AT CELL 11947356 REQUESTING BACKUP FROM BRANCH 284 THIS IS NOT A DRILL ELIMINATE THE INTRUDERS, DONT SPARE THEM" "oh cr--" scar detto grabbing the boy with his free hand because he thought he can shoot with one hand "RUN! and the started sprinting down the halls while raven killed half a dozen guards without missing A shot, scar started to shoot but he underestimated the pistole recoil and it flew out of his hand. the gun acted as a flare would and più guards came at the secondo the gun hit the floor, wall, he didn't remember. the guards finally surrounded them and then raven detto under her voice " grab my leg" so scar did hesitantly with the boy in his other hand. "good bye" raven detto then the flew up to the vents. "grappling hook, comes in handy." then the guards started shooting the ceiling like the they were tad poles in a Olympic sized swimming pool, the scurried along. "ugh man this is tiny". then they came to an end, the vent being of cheap, flimsy metal, under all there wait it dented, creaked then broke. "what do yah know, were at the flight deck" raven detto then scar, who was on his head went "well i thought the pod was small"
there! done finished the story. how do te like that as a comeback
(Zim's POV)
She was tall. She had black hair. She obviously wasn't human. Sparky was her name, and she was purple, and furry... so furry... with beautiful, ocean blue eyes, and the sharpest nails. Her teeth- they were not teeth, they were fangs. Fangs that could probably rip someone apart. One bite, and it's all over.
Ms. amaro, bitter put Sparky successivo to me. A couple minuti into class, I found a slip of paper on my desk. I opened it:
Hey.
I looked over at Sparky, and she smiled. I'm sure it was intended to be a friendly one, but it was everything but. Those fangs...
I didn't reply. She followed me around all day. I was glad when Skool let out. But everywhere I looked, I saw a strange creature, not Irken nor human.
When I returned to my base, I went down to my lab. I no sooner got there whe the doorbell rang. I commanded GIR to answer, and I got into my disguise. I then went to the first floor.
When I got there, I didn't like what I saw. Not one bit.
She was tall. She had black hair. She obviously wasn't human. Sparky was her name, and she was purple, and furry... so furry... with beautiful, ocean blue eyes, and the sharpest nails. Her teeth- they were not teeth, they were fangs. Fangs that could probably rip someone apart. One bite, and it's all over.
Ms. amaro, bitter put Sparky successivo to me. A couple minuti into class, I found a slip of paper on my desk. I opened it:
Hey.
I looked over at Sparky, and she smiled. I'm sure it was intended to be a friendly one, but it was everything but. Those fangs...
I didn't reply. She followed me around all day. I was glad when Skool let out. But everywhere I looked, I saw a strange creature, not Irken nor human.
When I returned to my base, I went down to my lab. I no sooner got there whe the doorbell rang. I commanded GIR to answer, and I got into my disguise. I then went to the first floor.
When I got there, I didn't like what I saw. Not one bit.