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What do te guys think of my poem? My English teacher detto it was good but I want to know your opinions :3 Please no harsh commenti ^_^

Dragons
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Up high in the sky they fly
ciclismo, escursioni in bicicletta round and round
Their mighty wings are great things
Soaring over the clouds
One da one they go
Greater than birds
Greater than planes
Their large bodies lift them away
Dragon power is strong
They are a peaceful creature
Always aflight in the sky
They shall never be dismissed
And stay with us forever
Respect them
Treasure them
For soon they will be nonexistent
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it's nice .3.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted più di un anno fa
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thanks :D
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
te want our opinions but we can't say anything bad?


seems legit.
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well they can be but I don't understand why anyone would say something mean D:
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
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Criticism m'dear.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted più di un anno fa
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@Keith Agreed. @16fallout CRITICISM learn to take it.
BlindBandit92 posted più di un anno fa
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huh
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
Ssmiley_143 said:
It is good!
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It is good!
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:DDDD yay thanks
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
egyptprincess7 said:
It's great.
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
Kenny756 said:
Its Nice! :)
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thank u ^_^
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
scalesandtails1 said:
That is really good!!
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
BlindBandit92 said:
Half the poem didn't rhyme but complessivamente, generale I like it. But honestly it is not one of my preferito poems.
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eh I'm not that good with rhyming but thank te :D
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
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^You're quite welcome.
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Usui--takumi said:
Well.. Draghi are peaceful creature? Lmao."Respect them and treasure them..For soon they will be nonexistent". They don't exist in the first place xDD Anyway, that was sweet and nice :D
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um wrong they DO exist :3
16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa
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but anyway thx
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Anime_Gir1235 said:
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IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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... IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDDDDD
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