Sonic fan Characters Article: Weeding out Gary Sue's- taco Test I

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posted by thetacoman

Tell me if te see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasy world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.

DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!

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About Cynthia the Bat & the new series, Cynthia the dark spirit

posted by Dethklokrox90

Cynthia is a female bat that was created da Black Doom for her mother & father, Moon the Bat & Saturn the Hedgehog.The way to tell how is that she has a dragon mark that is permanint including ancient symbols and words, also it is located on her left arm,it is noticeable all the time,and she hides it under her gloves.
Her boyfriend is Mars the hedgehog, but she has a crush on Shadow,Knuckles,and Silver.

(The series)
My new series is called Cynthia the dark spirit.
The first one of the series is called, The dark beginning.
I will probely have to put it in several parts first.
But be patient and it will be finished.

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Ruby the hedgehog spy Part 6 What happens now

posted by zelda4559

ruby the hedgehog with the Blue Chaos smeraldo

ruby the hedgehog with the Blue Chaos Emerald

"Where is Ruby going" Cream ask Sandy. Sandy took a minuto to answer "who knows" Sandy says As I run towrds the base I knew. It was still there. I walk in and see the other agents runing around. "Ruby is something bothering you" says another agent I take a minuto to answer "I don't know where to go, Emma is a traitor and I don't know who to trust" I say "well, I guess we'll..." she was cut off da a blast from Eggman's robots "Great" I say "Ruby the hedgehog, give the chaos emerald" Eggman says "hide in here" the agent says as she opens up the basement door. I go down in the basement and go...

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The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul: Pt 6

posted by Milesprowerfan

Note: This is one of the critical chapters in this saga! Please rate and comment!

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“Am I in trouble?” Sonic’s voice was vague of emotion. His eyes, looking down at the tavolo he was chained to, shown with anger.

“You think?” Lil was close to tears. She limped over to the tavolo in the dark room. She had refused for two crutches, so the one scraped on the floor. “You don’t know how much time you’re going to spend in jail! I don’t think te even want to know!”

Sonic swore under his breath. All he wanted to do at that moment was to incinerate the table. Laser-vision hadn’t been...

About Drakero The Dragon

posted by AceRider

Drakero Almaldo Bonsachei Junior, o simply Drakero The Dragon, is a 517 (17) anno old from Dragon Raw, a place that is consist of 5 islands. He is the secondo oldest of 4 children. There is Draco (Older Brother), himself, Ku (Younger Sister), and Drapy (Younger Brother). His parents are Almaldo (Father), and Drei (Mother). His grandfather from his father's side of his family is a god, Heracles/Hercules, meaning that he has the same strength as he does. Drakero went on adventures when he was 10 years younger, and returned 10 years later. Sense then, Drakero become very Ribelle - The Brave and heroic. He has...

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Zariah Riot profilo

posted by TakTheFox

Basics

Name: Zariah Riot
Nickname: Z’rio, Ario (self-appointed)
If character has one, REAL name: Vampire-banshee Drone?
Reason for Name: When deciding on a più interesting name, she had Dio lista some vampire-sounding names, and she chose from those.

Gender: Female
Birthdate: Twelfth of December (Supposedly)
Age currently: 17
Age at beginning of story: It’s unknown how long she was alive before revealing herself.
Age character appears to be: Mid Teens o old teens.

Appearance

Species: Vampire Banshee

Primary Color (Main fur/skin): Very pale grey/tan
Secondary Color (Mouth, chest, ect.): Dark red stripes,...

The Hero and the Guardian of Mobius part 1

posted by destinyhunter77

Chapter 1: first day

Sonic's POV

"Beep! Beep! "Groan. I can hear my parents calling me and god I wish I didn't. "Sonic get down here this instant! You're going to be late for your first giorno of school!" "Shit!" Now that I wish I had heard that last week! I quickly grabbed my bag, grabbed a chili dog, and ran out the door. I was almost at my first class when I nearly ran over 2 girls. The one that I'm assuming is the oldest pushed the other one out of the way which made it harder to stop and keep my balance. I nearly fell over, but she grabbed my wrist and helped steady me. I looked up at them...

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Genie 'Monette' The Hedgehog =Biography=

posted by TimidDesire

=General=
Name: Genie 'Monette'
Nicknames: Gen
Age: 24
DOB: March 5th
Gender: Female
Species: Hedgehog
Sexuality: Straight
Material Status: Single

=Physical=
Height: 2'10
Weight: 29 lbs
Eye Color: Misty Green
Fur Color:
(Base): Light yellow (Creamy)
Secondary): Darker bleak gold
Main Features: Multiple scars covering her body. From Surgery and from family. (Read History)
Tail: Short hedgehog tail

=Personality=

Main Personality traits:
Very Quiet, patient, observant, skittish, envious, blunt, logical, cautious, compassionate, discreet, emotional, open-minded, affectionate, timid, night-owl, anxious.

Likes: Children,...

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Mustacheo ANNOUNCEMENT In Another World Mob Suez

posted by TakTheFox

For those that don’t know, “In Another World: Mob Suez” is an else-world non-cannon story that takes people’s characters and puts them into the real world. The main character of this story is Dave Hyatt, who a side-character in the regular stories I usually make. People’s origins are tweaked, and people live in a semi-civilian-based life.

I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to cancella the story.

There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and...

Don't mess with the wolf.

posted by scougesgirl

Ashton walked around the small apartment she shared with two other people. She was having a nervous breakdown, shadow hadn't texted her in five hours. She took a deep breath, then she sat on the couch, and turned on the tv.
One of her room mates walked in. She was a brown and green bob cat named Tiber. She was skilled with a sword and fast not as fast as Ashton with a pair of hover skates on, but fast. The cat walked over to the lupo on the couch. "Hey, Ashton te okay?" Tiber asked the blue wolf.
"Yeah."
"Okay, what's for dinner?" Tiber sat down successivo to her friend.
"What ever, Ferrari makes...

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Almaldo The Dragon

posted by AceRider

Drakero Almaldo Bonsachei Senior is a 542 (42) anno old dragon from Central Dragon Raw. He has 4 kids with his wife, Drei, and is the descendant of Hercules. Almaldo was a commander of the Dragon Raw army, but retired and became a family man.

He taught his secondo son, Drakero how to use melee attacks and helped him find out that he had the strength of Hercules.

He married Drei at the age of 22, and had 4 children: Draco, Drakero, Ku, and Drapy. He spent più time with Draco and Drakero, making them stronger and ready to take on the world. He gave both of them one of his earring as a charm for...

Mobius Academy chapter Four

posted by TakTheFox

Chapter four
(Sept 19th Friday)

It was two più days until the rain had finally stopped. The students who had decided to play sick were found out and school was becoming more-less normal again. From Saturday through Sunday the students were allowed off campus, and could virtually go anywhere they wanted to. They were however dato special injections of a tacking fluid, as to ensure they did not get Lost o were gone too long. It was not a painful process, and the liquid was not harmful, but the students did not enjoy the lack of privacy it made.

On Friday though it was a nice day. Grace enjoyed...

nube, nuvola the Echidna

posted by unknown99

Cloud the Echidna (Backstabber)

Despite his weight, he was called nube, nuvola since he is lighter than any other children. From the City of Pressure, he was a shy boy who lived in the center of the city. When he was discovered his powers of Pressure, he was immediately sent to Andromedian Pyrokinetic Academy due to his murder of a child who was teasing him. He was not studying well due to the trauma about his powers when he accidentally killed a child da squashing him da increasing the number of pressure around the child. His face was mostly pale. But, as he was staying longer there, he was studying better, recieving better marks...

Negam "Chibi" Mota

posted by NoctusLynx

This Little fellow was named as such due to his small will. He doesn’t want to leap into something right away unless he knows o learns that he must, since no one else will, o it’s absolutely necessary. He shows a god-like resiliency. He’s no good of a fighter, but he can take a hit, and take one indeed. One of his feats includes buying time for the creation of a WMD. He was still in its blast radius. And survived. chibi can’t seem to keep up with his responsibilities. He almost never makes ends meet whenever he promises to do something. He’s very lazy, and prefers to stay out of...

A Kea to the Past- Birth

posted by NoctusLynx

Now, where had I left off the last time we had met? When was- ah, yes, I remember.

The stranded Eastern Kea had to reach the Western Kea tribe. Not doing so could potentially ultimately result in the utter extinction of her tribe within weeks time. To steer away from any cliches that haunt the literary world, I will not say she was the last hope because her death was to be due in several hours.

She, da the strike of chance, that of which we all possess, be it small o large; positive o negative, she found the Western Tribal Kea. She tried what she could to save his life, rather what was left...

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Antonio's Official Bio

posted by ShadowFan100

Character Chart
Character's full name: Antonio (no last name)
Reason o meaning of name: None, really. He gave himself that name
Character's nickname: None. Unlike Shock, he thinks nickname's are stupid.
Reason for nickname: None
Birth date: He wasn't actually born. He was created when Malice ha rubato, stola a sample of Shock's inner evil from him to make Antonio
Powers: fuoco (which is classified as the "dark side of lightning")
Theme: None

Physical appearance
Age: None
How old does he/she appear: same age as Shock
Weight: Uh.....same as Shock I would think
Height: Same as Shock
Body build: Same as Shock
Shape of...

Secrets: Acts 3

posted by Dragonfruit44

"Ok, so here's the plan." Bard detto to everyone in the den," Tonight is that special Masquerade Ball thingy. Since its being held at a huge mansion, there will be big loot. We can go as anything we want, we just have to have a mask. We'll walk in and once the party starts to end, we'll hide. Then the loot will be ours. Any questions?" Bard asked and it looked as if no one was paying attention," HEY! Are te idiots even listening?!" " We're listening!," Selena yelled,"How are we suppose to get out once we got the loot?" Selena asked. " I thought you've been pretty steamed lately, so I thought...

Nightmares Part 3

posted by Dragonfruit44

" What?!" Nat was surprised and scared at the same time. " Tell us everything." Crystal detto and pulled out a chair for Rose. "Well, I was with my brother at our house in the woods. I usually leave him alone at the house, because I know he can take care of himself. I had to leave to get groceries and when I came back he was gone." Rose was really scared. She was at the edge of crying. "How old is your little brother and what's his name?" Crystal asked. Flare brought some tea, to help calm her nerves. "His name is Thorn and he's ten. He's about as tall as Flare, and he's a green echidna."
"Was...

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The REAL reasons why Cyber and I haven't been online...

posted by XxRocket95xX

Reasons for Both:
1) All the drama in this club drives us nuts.
2) We have a lot of schoolwork and YouTube stuff we do.
3) We have various extra activities we also participate in that take up our time.
4) Various internet problems.

Cyber:
1) Too busy playing Xbox.
2) Too busy playing games on his computer.
3) Too busy making YouTube videos.

Me:
1) I hang out with Friends a lot, so I don't usually be rude and use their computers.
2) When I'm not at a friend's house, I'm caught up in playing Pokemon Black 2...
3) I'm a teenage girl, what più could te want to know? XD

più Than Bolts-Chapter one

posted by SaraTheDog

She tried to open her eyes. All she saw was lonely black. She couldn't. It felt like her eye lids were rocks, too heavy to move.
Roxan looked at her. She took notes, waiting for her to wake. She became desperate. Creating a robot with life, emotion and knowledge- it took her months to make her perfect.
She opened her eyes slowly.
Roxan stood there, waiting for her first words.
"Where...am I?" She, the robot, awoke.
Roxan, with out hesitation, answered. "Your in my lab. I've been waiting and working for months for your system to start working."
The robot girl looked down at the tube in her stomach....

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LGIaS pt:10 Mordred's Lullaby (Cassie's past)

posted by zutaradragon

"hush, child, darkness will rise from the deep and carry u out in2 sleep. child, darkness will rise from the deep and carry u out in2 sleep..." i sang in2 the darkness as i walked thro the forests i knew once..."Guileless son, I'll shape your belief. And you'll always know that your father's a thief. And te won't understand the cause of your grief, But you'll always follow the voices beneath..."

I should start this story at the beginning...by saying this. there was a prophecy in my kingdom....of a son who would die 4 the right his mother was denied. I was born princess. Yes, I was also human...