Sorry about the delay on chapter two.... Well anyways, here is the link to chapter one if te missed it.
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Where we left off....
"Hey, what are te doing?!" A prisoner shouted. più heads of prisoners turned to him. They ran to him, but it was too late. He placed the bottle in the middle of the pentagram and started murmuring strange sounds under his breath. The bottle started glowing and shaking. Finally, the deep scarlet turned into a deep green. He picked up the bottle and started drinking.
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THE EGGMAN MECH whatched as the train passed by; then he threw a sticky bomb on it and set the timer for 3:00. The bot flew off.


Trance let Windy go.
"Were are te guys going?" he asked Windy.
"Wherever the train takes us."
Trance laughed.
"Same as always eh? I'm glad to see that te brought along your boyfreind Spike."
Windy turned a little red in the face.
"He is NOT my boyfreind!"
"Is too"
"Is not!"
"Too!"
"NOT!"
"To!"
They argued for some time.
"NOT!!!!!" Windy yelled while covering her face trying not to giggle a bit.
Trance looked at Spike.
"Just joking around a little!"
Spike didn't answer. He thought...

THEY STOOD WAITING for the train. They were at an opening far into the wood.
Spike bent over to dig out something golden. He found it was a power ring, but it felt different.
It had a different aura.
Spike slipped it into his pocket.
"We're just gonna JUMP on a moving train?!" yelled out Windy, unaware that she was trembeling like an aspen leaf.
Storm looked at her.
"Do te wanna take antoher chance of flying?"
Windy froze. Then she found herself inching twoard Spike almost in a gesture of protection.
In the distance a train whistle cried. This made Kitty a bit più alert.
The train sped by. They all...

Chapter four: That’s Chells
Location: 66 Jazon Ave, Lexistropolis
Date: Sunday, November 30th 4337
Time: 8:51 P.M.

Tess and Zen Solomon, had finally made their way back to their neighborhood, panting and sweating; trying to think of an excuse as to how they would explain being at Lizzy’s house till eight thirty, of which they were to be home, and then heading off to go help their parents finish moving a friend into his new house. They knew that their parents would be cross; they just didn’t know how they would get out of it.

When they arrived home, there was a note on the dining room table....

"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ detto to Emily. "Ok thank te AJ."Emily detto to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca detto yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one detto in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...

Chris kept cheering. Eventually, he went to a Mobian store and bought a rug, a bed, wallpaper, a refrigerator, food, a TV, and a Nintendo 64. They were all very cheap, and either way, Chris had a lot of rings with him. He carried them all back to his home, one da one. Eventually, he got in his letto and fell asleep. MEANWHILE, AT THE LOOP WHERE MADJIN WAS LAYING.... A smirk spread across Madjin's face He opened his eyes. They were glowing red. His hands started glowing. He blinked and his eyes stopped glowing. He slowly stood back up and chuckled. He slowly walked away. He saw a circular peice...

First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu o Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If te don't know the whole issue, here's some domande I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

Demons,Soldiers,Helicopters,Jets,Tanks,A burning City,A Lightning Demon,And Typhoon's Group.

That's just GRRREEEAATTT isn't it?

Typhoon,Slahsing Demons left from right,Running across the Hellish City,Then he jumped and kicked down another Demon and slashed it's head off.

Haze,Being the Swords man he is,Cut down every last Demon he saw,He chopped off the legs of the one in front of him,and Stabbed his face.

Nocturn,With his Shotgun,Walked down the street,And continued to shoot down every Demon,He put a shot gun up to a Demon's face and shot it clean off.

Mother,Being the most Ferocious,Ripping apart...

As the volpe noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a mese ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. fringuello inhabits it.Dr. fringuello was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the volpe wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very superiore, in alto of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young volpe knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason o meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

Midnight was snoozing her life away in her Gothic style castle. It was decorated with tons of things that she liked, and they definetly were not gothic! She quietly snored like a angel, and her petite hands tapped on her paper. Her butler, John Vezun Cuando, looked at her. He had her tè with sugar all prepared for her, and he thought his efforts were for naught. The perfect tè time, ruined beyond imagination. John was a male visone who had a silvery white pelt and wore a butler's attire with a red carnation in his upper pocket. The serene but friendly butler spoke in a formidable British accent,...

“… There might have been a time when te actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want te to become something that te don’t want to be.” – Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do te remember the first time te ever drew your fan character? When te created him/her, te had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that fan characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories...