True Writers Article: Abandoned

posted by sadiebugz00

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SAY WHAT NOW?
Derek’s Perspective

I drive up to my house and open up the front door quietly just in case Jess was taking a nap. She was not, I repeat, not taking a nap.
I walk in to find my girlfriend, the one that detto she knew the best for me and would never cheat on me, was sitting there successivo to Landon. My best friend! She kept on trying to get closer to him, but good ol’ Landon kept pushing her away. “Come on!!” she was whining, “You know te wanna snuggle!”
“No. I absolutely don’t want to ‘snuggle’,” he replied, I could see horror on his face as he kept backing away until he fell onto the floor.
“HA! I’ve got te now!” She yelled out, smug with victory. Just at that moment I decided to make myself visible.
“HEY!” I yell out before she could do anything that would scare my best friend away from me forever.
“Dude… It’s NOT what it looks like-” Landon starts.
“I know. I’ve been standing here for a few minuti now,” I reply, looking Jesse right in the eye, which quickly flitted away to avoid eye contact. “Jess,” I say slowly, still in shock, “explanations?”
“Wellll…” she started, “He detto that he wanted to get to together and not tell you!”
“No way! Dude, believe me, te know I wouldn’t do that,” Landon retorts.
“Likely story, Jesse…” I say sarcastically, “Listen, now that I know that you’re so likely to just run off from me, we’re…. done. Over with. So get the heck out of my house.”
“But I Amore you! We were supposed to be together forever!!”
“That’s what I thought at first, too. Not so much now. Get OUT of my house. NOW.”
“Fine, just let me do one thing before I leave…” she said, with a mischievous look in her eyes. She leaned down and whispered something in Landon’s ear… Something that I couldn’t hear.
Landon looked positively terrified as she backed away slowly, with a small smile on her face until she was out the door.
“What did she say?” I ask Landon.
“Text me…”

sadiebugz00 This is my least favorite chapter. I am in 6th grade after all, and my teacher AND my parents would be reading it so... it's not very interesting.

100 Rooms Ch 3 Tell me what te think!

posted by Weasel1999

III The Library
The successivo room Ember visited was to her a Heaven on Earth. An enormous room just for holding books! The ceiling was so high it would have taken ten of her standing on superiore, in alto of one another the reach it. The shelves and shelves of libri were piled right up to the superiore, in alto and there were several ladders placed conveniently so that she could reach the topmost books.
Ember walked round the room as though she were in a dream. She loved Leggere and devoured every book she found but she had never had a whole biblioteca full of them to herself. She barely knew where to start. Every square inch of...

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Why do I never know what to call my stories?

posted by Sylvia_Puffin

Gerald wrinkled his nose at the earthy, mossy smell that always filled the woods. He longed to get back to his palace, but there was work to be done, and a king must do his work, after all.
“Hurry up!” he shouted at the coal black cavalli dragging the carriage. They bolted and took off.
Gerald leaned back against the soft, silky back of the sede, sedile and watched the trees blur by.
How grateful he was that he didn’t live out here, with all the faerie and elves and goblins. No, goblins lived in the marshes, didn’t they? But the faerie-folk, elves…still out here. He could feel them watching...

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The Dragon Princess

posted by BlondLionEzel

Chapter 2

Lawrence lived in a Chamber for a few years. But the Dragon Princess had tried to get his attention.

"LAWRENCE, cena IS READY!" The Dragon Princess yelled at Lawrence, who was in his Chamber.

"I am not hungry!" Lawrence told her.

"I WILL BREAK DOWN THE DOOR!" She screamed at him.

"No thanks." Lawrence replied as The Dragon Princess sat down.

"Why won't te Amore me!" She asked as she started to cry.

"Is that why i am here?" Lawrence asked her, now very confused.

"No one loves me! No one ever has and ever will!" The Dragon Princess told Lawrence as tears filled her eyes.

"Don't cry" Lawrence...

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The Woods (short story)

posted by alicia386

In the deep dark woods lies a house. A cottage house that only has one inhabitant. The one inhabitant onle has one visitor every month.

It was wintertime when that one visitor made his last visit.

Sherman E. Collins was his name and snooping was his name. The bald, chubby man knocked on the rotted wood. He waited for a good 2 minuti but nothing happened. When he was just about to knock again, the door creaked open. He shrugged it off. It was a common thing in these abandon houses.

Clutching his clipboard, he made his wasy into the house. The shattered windows, yellowing photos, and missing floor...

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The Rules of a Horror Movie Ch.2

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 2
    Be careful what te kill for
    “So…what’s your project on kiddies?” Ms. Arthur asks us.
    “So we have the first few installments of our documentary-”
    “Movie,” Sasha interjected.
    Ashlynn glared at her, “documentary of our very own horror hour.”
    Ms. Arthur frowns. “Horror hour?”
    “Um…you know, ma’am, the killing’s that took place...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Sequel Ch.8

posted by Problematic129

    Chapter 8
    Old enemies
    “Welcome everyone! To Club Aprenta!” Ali laughed excitedly and clapped her hands, Sage whistled, I jumped up and down, and Beth bowed in front of the newest additions.
    “Club Aprenta?” Scotty asked. “What kind of name is that? And what do we do anyways?”
    I shrugged. “Nothing really, we just made this up to spend più time together, te know how can school be.”
    “In other words,” Honey put her hands up in the air. “FREE...

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Thanks for the Memories Chapter one

posted by SilverFanGirl

Thanks for the memories
Chapter one
June 6, 1994, my birth. My mother never meant to have me. Never did. My father's condom apparently broke so they were stuck with me. A babygirl. I had short brown hair with amber eyes. But when I was born, I had blue with a light brown lining around my pupil. The doctors never could figure that part out. My eyes changed quicker than most babies. My eyes changed a week earlier than they were supposed to. That's why I get picked on, I tell that story and no one believes me. They call me "Weirdo", "fake", etc.
Though my mother left and my father is a total drunk,...

100 Rooms Chapter One

posted by Weasel1999

I. The Nursery

Ember lived in her nursery for the successivo few months, only being let out occasionally to go to the toilet. All she saw were the four walls around her but it wasn’t all bad.
The room was painted a pretty sky-blue and the carpet was thick, fluffy and a deep midnight blue. There was a letto and a huge white wardrobe with the most beautiful, vecchio stile clothes inside.
Rich velvets cloaks, soft pelliccia stoles, bright silk dresses, every item of clothing needed to make a young lady of society look beautiful.
But Ember was not a young lady of society living in Victorian times. She was a...

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The Deadly Truth Ch.7

posted by alicia386

Chapter 7: te Can't Trust Anyone These Days

James Knight slumped in his chair. It seemed like the most appropriate thing to do in this situation. How else was he suppose to act? He was a train wreck waiting to happen. He didn't bother combing his dirty blonde hair o wear decent clothes. He still had on his Lakers felpa and faded blue jeans with holes ripped in the front. This was the kind of outfit he wouldn't dare where around the house if this was a regular day. For shoes, he had his scuffed, black Reeboks. His eyes were red and puffy but he still radiated that devilish charm...

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A Fallen Amore

posted by Dhampires

She waited at the doorstep nearly all night he never came.

She quietly made my way to our room his image was the only thing that flooded my head.

'Would he come home? Had something happened to him? If it had why hadn't someone called?' she was thought she knee on the inside she was being over dramatic.

She leaned over her balcony looking on to the woods beyond the night stares filled the sky shimmering like diamonds, she smiled as the northern lights appeared it was rare to see in such a place other han Alaska but they shown bright. And as quickly as they came they left.

She quickly washed up and...

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To Know te

posted by alicia386

I use to know you
but now its over
and i am not going back
had my cuore broken
had my dreams blown away
it only took te a second
to rearrange my whole day

I use to know you
but now its over
and i see that now
te blew me away
far from here
and i couldnt make it back
but i bet te knew that

I use to know
someone like you
he was friendly
but i left him behind
in the rain
in the cold
where i couldnt see him

i hope you're different
it would help
if te werent exactly like him
nice to know you
but i must go
and protect my soul
how nice of te to stop by
but please go home now

I use to know you
but now im long gone
and it feels great'
to leave that burden behind
i wont see te again
i wont be there when te fall
just know that i
wont pick te up again

Bad Luck Fortune (short story)

posted by alicia386

Trina Harper Lost her job, fiancé, and her mom died half a mese ago. Life could not have gotten worse for this twenty anno old.

She strolled inside a nearby Chinese Restraurant that as filled with people. She sat down in the corner sede, sedile and murmured her ordered the waitress. "Just a fortune cookie, please."

Her life had gotten so messed up when Kyle, her deadbeat fiancé, left her for her older sister. She was never able to escape this string bad luck.

An ancient, wrinkled woman hobbled her way to his table. "I made this just for you," she said. She hobbled away.

"And now I have old ladies giving...

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Judgement giorno [Short Story]

posted by para-scence

“Craig! Get up! We’re going to be late!“ My sister Rachel pounded her fist on my door. I reluctantly opened my eyes to look at the clock. I had only ten minuti to get ready. I cursed under my breath and got dressed quickly, not bothering to grab anything to eat. I got to Rachel’s car just before she was about to ditch me. I tried to catch up on my algebra homework on the car ride to school.

“You really should’ve done that yesterday,“ Rachel scolded me. “You’re failing as it is.“ Of course, little miss perfect always had to tell me what I was doing wrong, even if she was...

Abandoned

posted by sadiebugz00

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ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective

A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees...

Abandoned

posted by sadiebugz00

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TORN
Derek’s Perspective

I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. I look around my extremely messy room with dirty clothes all over the floor. Carter happens to be sleeping on a few shirts of mine. My eggshell colored walls, which used to be white, are clearly covered in grime. There is a strong stench of wet dog, pizza, and some kind of rotting Cibo from underneath my bed. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind...

Avalon Pt.2 Ch.1

posted by alicia386

"Oh god," groaned Luca Edgewood. He glanced at his watch,. It was already past 8am. He dropped his skateboard, got on it, and rode away down the busy streets of Brunswick.

"Be careful today!" His mother shouted at him through the screen door, but he was to far to hear her warning. Lucas's mom was very suoerstitious woman who believed in witches, ghosts other Supernatural creatures. Luca thought all of this happened when his dad left.

Luca pushed back hard as he could with his right foot. He was already late. With all of his focus, he was barely able to dodge pedestrians, seeding cars, and occasionally,...

I don't know what to call this but it's the prologue of my new story :)

posted by Weasel1999

Prologue

The sun is just minuti from rising and the night is growing lighter. An alter made entirely of blue marble, jade, and amethyst is illuminated. Two tiny bambini lie on superiore, in alto writhing and screaming in discomfort. They are naked, only a few days old and the chill of the stone slowly seeping into their Bones will surely kill them. The larger of the two will not stop screaming while her twin just sobs quietly.
Their frail mother stands a few feet away determined to finish what she came here to do but her eyes are bloodshot and red raw from her constant tears. But she is not alone. Her husband...

war for freedom chapter 1

posted by juliet98

In the anno 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied da a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone Lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It detto that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...

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100 rooms prologue (should I continue?)

posted by Weasel1999

Prologue
She never knew she had an uncle until her parents died. It’s strange how- sometimes in life when te lose important people in your life te gain some more.
Her mother and father died in a house fire. No one knew how it started except the one daughter who managed to survive.
But she was in no state to tell. She suffered mild burns but her mind suffered worst of all. She never spoke again.
She was kept in hospital for six months but eventually she was packed off to her uncle Scipio. She was thirteen years old and many detto it was a crime sending a child off to such an evil man as Scipio....

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Princess Elizabeth chapter 1

posted by riehlemarie

Once there lived a normal middle school girl, o so she thought.She had long brown hair, green with a hin of blue eyes. Her name is Elizabeth. Elizabeth's mother, Rebecca, has blond hair, and blue eyes. Elizabeth always pondered about it.

When Elizabeth was 5 years old she asked her mom about it. Rebecca had to think fast so she made up a little story for Elizabeth so she wouldn't want to ask about it. So Rebecca told Elizabeth "Lizzie", [ Elizabeth's nickname] " te look just like your daddy, but daddy left us." Rebecca thought Elizabeth would be fine without knowing the truth, that Elizabeth...