i dont know about this idea i had about this book please be honest about what te think of it and i kinda want to call it undead if te have better ideas about a name also tell me

I probably would lol
Its not all that original though...no offence

the name maybe needs a little work, give the character a unique name. Maybe make him older as well like in his thirties so he can have più of a history and maybe change it from hunting Vampiri#From Dracula to Buffy... and all creatures of the night in between. to like a new form of humans that suck the life out of people o something i dont know its really up to u mate

I think it is great, but it needs a big twist, otherwise it is too much like other stories. Maybe something really, really drastic happens, o a girl vampire is introduced, I don't know.

i like your idea, yes it may not be origonal but not many stories are they all have symilarities, i would deffinaly read it da the way. anyway i do think the guy should be a lil older maybe in his mid o late twenties but not much older than that, u should deffinatly add a girl coz no story is ever complete without a lil romance maybe this war o whaterver te are plannin to write about could end up killing a girl he likes (maybe a child cappuccio friend)and i dont know him being clouded da revenge o sumthing and becoming reackless to kill her murder, i hope this helps

No offence but I've heard this story in countless settings but it still the same plot actually there's a movie out ( haven't seen it) called daybreakers with a very similar plot