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posted by dragonrider
That same day- at home Eric's perspective

If I was causing stress for her I might as well just left when I could. I cared for her. I even took care of her when she took ill in the future.
I remember it so well. I was walking into my house when my dad stopped me "Son, your mother is sick. Can te take care of her while I go to work?" he asked
I didn't have to answer I went straight into the bedroom. I saw her lying on the bed. She was pale white and her hair was all frizzy. I sat kneeled against the letto "Mother what's wrong?" I asked
She smiled weakly "Oh Eric. It's the horrible choice I made in high school. It arrived finally," she said
I frowned "What are talking about?" I asked holding her hand
She looked straight ahead "Not now honey. Mommy needs to sleep," she detto closing her eyes. She never did wake up. I never got to say that I lov-
"Eric are te coming in?" Tom asked interrupting my thoughts
I nodded and walked into the house and sat down on the divano Tom was sitting on. He turned on the TV.
I was very curious and wanted to know about Tom and Athen's childhood "So did te guys ever te know hang out when te were little?" I asked
He frowned "Oh sure all the time! She even taught me how to get girls. Listen dude I'm pretty sure that siblings don't hang out with each other o play together when they were little," he said
My face flushed "Oh. Are te sure?" I asked
He shrugged "I don't ask Athena. I don't remember that crap. She does. She remembers everything," he said
I nodded. That was true. She never forgot anthing. She even reminded me when it was my girlfriend's birthday and our anniversary.
"Why are te asking this stuff man? Did te ever do that with your siblings?" Tom asked
I looked inoltrare, avanti "Uh no. I am an only child," I detto lying
He nodded "Uh huh sure. Whatever te say man," he said
The phone rang before I had the chance to say "I'm not lying!" Tom got up and answered it.
"Hello? Who is this? Oh why hello my dear. What? Oh fine. ATHENA! It's for you!" he yelled
We hear a faint "I got it!" from upstairs and Tom hung up the phone. I asked Tom who it was and he detto it was Emily. We then heard a loud pitching scream and the sound of feet coming down the stairs "Really? They did? Awesome! Why? Oh wait it doesn't matter. What's that? He's at the mall? Oh my god I have to be there!" we heard Athena shrieking
Athena appeared and the bottom of the stairs phoneless and she quickly got her coat. Before she left she looked at us "If I am not home before mom gets here. Tell her I'm at the mall. Okay Tom?" she asked quickly
Tom hardly looked and mumbled "Fine,"
She glanced at me "You will make sure he does okay?" she asked
I nodded and she smiled "Thanks bye!" she detto disappearing out of the door. We heard a car start and go.
Tom rolled his head to look at me "Dude te are letting her take advantage of you," he said
I frowned and denied it but he kept going "Oh yes she is. She knows te like her so she is taking advantage of that and making te do stuff for her," he said
I stood up "Dude it's just a favor. Let it go. Where's your bathroom?" I asked
He had gone back to watching football "It's uh down the hall. Look and walk straight ahead until te hit a door. That's it," he said
I went down to the bathroom and did my thing. When I was finished I walked in the hallway and found her room. I smiled and pulled out Delor. I entered her room and started going over everything to see if there was anything that made her really sick in the future
Finally I got to the last drawer and I had Lost track of time. I opened it up and faced her drawer of undergarments. I guess I kind of froze there in shock and someone might take that the wrong way.
"Eric what are te doing?" Athena asked from the doorway
I gasped and dropped Delor. He landed on the clothes with a tiny thump. I looked at Athena. She didn't look mad. She almost looked curious and a bit amused "I uh uh uh it was uh" I then bolted out of the room rushing past her and ran out of the house.
As I ran down the strada, via I hear Tom calling after me "How are te going to get home?" he yelled
I panted "The bus!" I screamed
"Eric te forgot your device thing!" I hear Athena shout
I didn't say anything. I just kept running living my dignity and their house behind.
posted by Sweet_Pants
It’s a silent staring match between te and her

The quiet air above te is whispering te words

Words te choose to ignore, words glaring at you,

Gnawing at te from the very tip of her eyes



But te won’t let down, no matter how much

She isn’t saying, no matter how much she can’t say

Because you’re in power, te brought her here

te yell, and she shrinks back, but in fear?

No, she’s waiting for her chips to add up

As life’s a poker game, the highs are all that won

She knows this; you’re the one who taught her

‘Lay low until te gain the trono

To strike back at those who thought

The same as Arrogance himself;

That you, gullible and pathetic, were theirs alone’

**************************************************
Please tell me what te think, criticizm is welcome.
Ladies and gentlemen, writers of all ages (especially teens/preteens) and species (except mosquitoes), welcome! I'm bored, have a writer's block made of concrete and am feeling particularly resentful towards the curse known as textese/chatspeak. (Seriously, whatever happened to good ol' morse code?) So I decided the best way to give my Scrivere a rest is to help out with yours! Aren't I generous? :)

Before I begin, I'd like to point out that I am not an expert da any means. I'm not a Scrivere guru o a master advice-giver-person. I am simply a fellow writer who wants to pass on what she's learned;...
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posted by twilight-rocks9
One giorno in my sixth grade anno I met a guy because of my friend Brianna Garcia well two guys really. The names were Jessie and Joe. Jessie was Brianna’s cousin I had to deal with him. Joe he was Brianna’s crush. I don’t know why but I hated Joe when I met him but I faked a smile because Brianna liked him maybe I hated him both because she latterly dragged me there and that didn’t put me in the best mood. But soon after Brianna had to leave. So I just stayed with the other group of people I hung out with and sometimes we literally hung out well up side down anyway. My seventh grade year...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I detto and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how te do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm colori like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my...
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posted by Spotty_Vision21
"Hey baby, where are te going?" growled a deep voice.

Tammy resisted the instinct to turn around and walked faster.

"Just keep moving and he'll go away. Just keep moving."

She was now hyperaware of her surroundings. The man's quickening footsteps. The cool but smoggy air whoosing in and out of her lungs. Her heartbeat speeding up. The clacking noise her heels made upon the sidewalk.

Her eyes darted left. The store window reflected a woman in her late 40's, blonde hair fading.

"C'mon, baby, turn around."

The voice sounded much closer. Tammy's hands began to shake.

What could he want with her? She...
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posted by Whiskey37
Jake wanted his dad to be proud of him.
He knew his dad was interested in wars.
'Why?' Jake wanted to know.
'Wars shape the world,' his dad said. 'If te have a knowledge of past wars, te can better understand current politics.'
Jake didn't really know what his dad meant.
'I get it,' he said.
'Clever boy.' His dad smiled and ruffled his hair.
Jake felt six feet tall.

Jake couldn't wait to tell his dad about his new school project.
'Guess what,' he said, as soon as his dad got in the door.
His dad looked at Jake. 'What?'
'We have to do a big project at school,' Jake said. 'We have to choose...
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My first kiss, here it is, the man of my dreams, together we are combined, lips entwined, hands joined, the feeling makes me overjoyed. His arms wrapped around me as he continues to baciare my lips,my arms in response to his, sposta around his neck. Holding him,beckoning him to come closer.

Our lips still flowing, we slide to the ground, his body on superiore, in alto of mine,holding me, caressing me. Stopping to take a breath, he whispers " Your a good kisser te know?".he chuckled as he brushed my hair with his fingers.

My cheeks flush red "no" i smile " but i do now" i pull him down, pressing my lips to his,...
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posted by babina
recap:

I had a feeling that that was some kind of signal and that they might be tricking me but what were am i going to do.I didn't know in the first place if i was planning to walk over, take her da the hand and walk her away o if the Qsix were the ones who were gonna walk away, all knew was that i just wanted to tell them to leave her alone.
But i had no other option of what to do so i started walking over to where she was standing planing to take her away, but as i took the fourth step, one of the Qsix guys pushed a book bag that was on the floor in my way. Before i saw it i was on the ground...
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posted by pixie09
this is a story that i wrote for my practice anno 12 exams, its theme was 'circle'
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The girl strode on, her cappuccio firmly over her head, her eyes fixed on the horizon. Around her, the cars grew less, but the trees grew plentiful. The orb-like moon rose steadily into the sky making visibility almost possible through the canopy of ever increasing leaves.

None of this mattered. The girl strode on, her face set, her one intention clear in her mind.

The cerchio must have closure.

At this thought, the girl lengthened her stride, each step crunching the fallen,...
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posted by Ms_Montana
Spotlight

1. Kalte Pizza

Es war ein kalter und verregneter Tag im November. Manche Menschen bezeichneten diesen Regen sogar als Schnee, aber nicht so Helena. Sie war nicht der Typ Mensch der das alles beschönigte.
Während sie durch tana, den voll gestopften U-Bahnsteig hetzte, kramte sie ihn ihrer Tasche nach ihrem Handy. Sie versuchte in dem Gedränge die Nummer ihrer Mutter zu tippen, jedoch ohne Erfolg.
Helena rollte genervt mit ihren Augen. Ihre Mutter hatte ihr gesagt sie müsse mittags ihre kleine Schwester Allison abholen. Und nur deswegen stand sie hier.
Links von ihr telefonierte ein schwer...
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posted by whitelion
love, a word that can bring much joy o much pain
it can put the cuore at ease o under strain
and as that word to each other we spoke
it made our hearts complete and not broke

a feeling unlike any other i felt
as te heavenly eyes made my cuore melt
te were always the one, i could tell
cause from the moment i saw te in Amore i fell

the words to describe te a poet can never posses
te were always the one that was hard to impress
te wanted più than poesia and fiori could give
because only on true Amore your cuore could live

to capture my cuore for te it only took
one moment one smile and one unforgettable look
 Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Okay, so this is a countdown of my most preferito authors of all time. It goes from igood #10 to magnficient #1.

I am also so happy for myself because this is technically my first work of Scrivere that I will soon publish.....

Alright, here it is;

1. Edgar Allen Poe - He has had a rough life filled with death, grief, abandonment, and misery, and his ways to cope with these difficult emotions were his magnificent stories and peoms that we enjoy to this day. Also, he and I can relate...
2. Stephen King - He has this enigmatic personality that makes te wonder and puzzle, and he's a bit of an oddball...
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Source: Google
posted by harold
The autore considered. Then the autore wrote:

Two opposites sat on a park bench

The autore deleted

eating their curds and whey

as soon as it was typed, and replaced it with

and one wanted the other to leave.

The critic noted "That's really not very specific, is it? Two 'opposites'? Come on, you're going to have to be più specific than that."

The autore considered. Then the autore wrote:

The Republican sat down successivo to the Democrat on the park bench

and nodded, satisfied. The critic clucked his tongue. "Welll...it's not exactly original, is it? And how different are they, really? Honestly, te couldn't...
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posted by lollipopszx3
As I stood there waiting at the strada, via corner I thought about how much I was going to kill Fawn. She's making me wait da the strada, via corner drenched in rain while she was probably getting a ride from her father.

I then saw her father's car turn up around the corner. Fawn, with her colourful Jansport bag came out... with an umbrella. I ran up to her and ha rubato, stola the umbrella.

"Hey gothie! Come back here!" She yelled. I laughed as I ran away. She loved to call me gothie. I wore black make-up, black clothing, and I loved skulls. But that doesn't make me goth!

If I'm not a goth, my own person, then...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
(end of chapter 6)
Bella pov
The pain was was to much, I couldn’t understand what was happening , my neck was burning , the burning took over my body it changed minuto da minuet it grew it rose I wanted to scream this pain out but that probable isn’t a good option ppl will think I'm weak! I clenched my teeth together wishing I never existed suddenly the burning changed! it left my neck! I was relived that the pain had lessen but a new pain started in my chest my cuore was was ripping its way out of my chest the sound of my cuore filled my ears it was getting on my nerves the sound continued...
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added by sapherequeen