Young Justice Article: my first fiction notes (no haters past this point)

my first fiction notes (no haters past this point)

posted by Dezzylove3

Name:Impulsia

Secret Identity:Allison Carter

Powers:she can control fuoco from her hands and when she kicks.

Apperance:she has shoulder length dirty blonde messy and flyaway hair,tattoos on neck and over body,that symbolize fire,wears a choker collana enhansed with magic from Doctor Fate that conceal her tatoos while shes in civil atire.

Civil Atire: A long sleeved belly shirt(dont wory shes well fit)a black leather giacca belly length also,black jeans with a chain attached to her wallet in her back pocket,red high-top sneakers,and the black choker necklace,sometimes she wears sunglasses,but not always,firery red eyes rimed with black eyeliner

uniform: a long sleeved black kevlar camicia that has ripps up both arms,black kevlar pants that just gos past her knees but just only that,and black kevlar scivolare su shoes,and a dark red utility belt, she has no choker but she wears biker glovesfor her hands.red eyeshadow and red paint under her eyes.

Age:15

Mentor:Volcanis (a girl)made up i know shes secretly in Amore with the bats <3

Home:Boston

Personality:fun, go getting,she has a short temper,and when she gets mad her hair catches on fire,she used to be in an all girl gang but she put that behind her,she carys a borsa with a bunch of hand tools in it like bobby pins for picking locks,and hammers and stuff,funny, shes intelligent when she wants to be,shes clumsy but can fix things easily, shes always trying to set her mom up with bats,its quit funny,her mom works for bruce wayne so its hard for her to hide her wuv!!

siblings:Older brother-Branden Carter,age 17,Younger sister-Michelle Carter-age 9,Younger brother-Jonathen Carter,age 3.they all look like her.

so there te go Allison Carter's bio tell me if i should make an intro story for her o not,remember no haters thanks T.T

Mclovin_69 i like her already :)you have potential.... in making characters

Dezzylove3 thank you

Dezzylove3 should i make story??

Mclovin_69 :) if u want

66Dragons Isn't everyone in love with bats? Or robin? :) Anyway, nice OC!

Mclovin_69 ive always like Robin but more in a little brother kind of way XD the brother i never had, ive always loved Wally though <3

Dezzylove3 FINISHED MY FIRST OC PWEASE READ

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A anno After, Part Twelve

posted by Candy77019

Megan groaned after a while of flying.

Megan groaned after a while of flying.
"What's wrong?" Aqualad asked her.
She sighed. "I could see Red cappuccio from here, but the bioship can't come close enough!"
I unbuckled and stood up. "So we run from here," I concluded.
The hatches opened under all of our feet and we headed toward the man in the red helmet.
"Megan, Superboy, and Erica, since te three can fly--"
"Leap," Superboy interrupted.
"You three must stay ahead of him. The rest of us will attack him from behind."
"Got it!" The three of us shouted at him.
We flew (or super-leaped) over the Red cappuccio and made a bacheca right in front of...

A anno After, Part Eleven

posted by Candy77019

"This is something I need to do."

Batman pulled into the cave after an eternity of flying. da now, it would be morning, but I had no thoughts of going to sleep.
He pressed a button that made the roof open.
I frowned. "You're going to investigate, aren't you?"
He nodded, not saying anything.
"The team will be curious," I warned him.
"I know."
"And if they're willing to search, I won't stop them," I said.
He sighed. "I know."
I climbed out of the plane, disappointed. "It won't hurt to ask for help," I suggested.
He shook his head. "This is something I need to do. Don't tell the team, let them figure out themselves."
"I can't...

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An Adventure chapter 19 (the final chapter)

posted by Skittles98

"Hello?” I called into empty space
I was on a desolate mountain, remnants of a great civilization everywhere. No matter where I ran, it all looked the same. Then I saw it. A flash of a familiar cape. Someone grabbed my hand and started pulling me along the path.
"Come on! She’s coming! Hurry!” detto the person dragging me along.
"Robin?” I asked “Is that you?” the person who was dragging me along, turned his head and I realized it was Robin. But he had dirt and grim all over his face for some reason.
"Too late” detto a scratchy female voice “I’m here”
I tired to find the source...

A anno After, Part Ten

posted by Candy77019

"Ah, Erica Richards, the Avatar. It's a pleasure to meet you."

After what seemed like forever, a tall brownish tower appeared into the night. I guess it was the Tower of Babel, according to what Batman had detto earlier.
He landed the plane amid some bushes, then climbed out.
We snuck behind a few trees. "Erica, te do exactly what I tell te to do, when I tell te to do it. No buts. Understand?"
"Umm, yeah?" Not really.
He nodded, then raced into the greenery with me close behind him.
It took a while for us to climb the tower without me flying, but we managed to make it work.
My hands were clutched onto the stone ledge, praying that I wouldn't slip with...

A anno After, Part Nine

posted by Candy77019

"Great. Now they can here what I'm thinking."

"The Spirits do not have any business with knowledge of the earth..." detto the Dragon Spirit while I was meditating.
"But Earth is apart of me! te HAVE to tell me who Red cappuccio is!" I protested.
"Red Hood? I know who he is!" Kid Flash shouted in my head.
Great. Now they can hear what I'm thinking.
"You could've asked us..." Megan detto mentally.
I sighed and opened my eyes. The Spirit World faded away in an instant, and I was back in the lounge with my teammates.
Fortunate for my sanity, Nightwing survived the gunshot wound, all because he wore a vest beneath his costume.
"Thanks for saving...

An Adventure chapter 15

posted by Skittles98

I was dancing beside Robin, Kalder, Musica, Artemis and Wally when a slow song came on.
"Wanna dance” Robin asked me. I heard Kalder ask Musica the same thing. Robin and I glared at Wally to ask Artemis at the same time. He looked at us then at her then back at us. I glared some more. He asked her.
"So, te having fun?” I asked Robin
"Yeah” Robin said
Then Wally took his revenge da ‘accidentally’ pushing me and Robin closer so our noses were touching. He ‘accidentally’ did the same thing to Kalder and Musica to, then went back to Artemis. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Kalder...

An Adventure chapter 10

posted by Skittles98

When I spoke, the words sounded loud and commanding yet I was speaking softly.

Suddenly, I wasn’t there any more. I was with Poseidon when he was teaching me how to use my ocean powers.
”Remember, Sarah, if te wish an ocean creature to do something, focus your mind on it. Clear your head.”
”Clear my head” I murmured
I opened my eyes and focused on the drakon that was lunging for Robin. Somehow I was at the drakon before it moved 5 inches. Also I was wearing a beautiful dress of white linen. When I spoke, the words sounded loud and commanding yet I was speaking softly.
”No” I repeated “Drakon, this is not your place to be. Go back to the ocean where you...

Adventure chapter 2

posted by Skittles98

After explaining to Kalder’ahm that I was ok, he asked what I was doing at the bottom of the ocean.
”If I tell te truth, promise not to turn me in to the police ”I said” don’t worry, I’m not a criminal” I added quickly after seeing his eye’s widen
”First, let’s bring te to puntellare, riva to meet the person who first noticed te might be in trouble” Kalder’ahm detto grabbing my hand again
”I know how to swim, in fact I’m actually a very strong swimmer” I snapped
As we swam to the spiaggia and I remembered my promise to my mom, to call her when we reached land.
”Hey Kalder’ahm-“...