For those that don’t know, “In Another World: Mob Suez” is an else-world non-cannon story that takes people’s characters and puts them into the real world. The main character of this story is Dave Hyatt, who a side-character in the regular stories I usually make. People’s origins are tweaked, and people live in a semi-civilian-based life.
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to cancella the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the più I look at this story, the più it sounds like some cliché teenage Anime plot, and te all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profilo of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential Amore interests aside from that, one that was owned da me, and one owned da Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were senza risposta plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were Leggere it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to cancella the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the più I look at this story, the più it sounds like some cliché teenage Anime plot, and te all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profilo of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential Amore interests aside from that, one that was owned da me, and one owned da Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were senza risposta plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were Leggere it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
Nickname: MTL
Age: Immortal(Resembles 14-16)
Species: Lynx/Nanite being
pelliccia color: Orange
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Red
Likes: His friends, justice, peace, a worthy foe, sleeping, adventure
Dislikes: His enemies, injustice, cheap shots
Personality: Sarcastic/Brave
Best quality: Strength
Powers: Nanite/Red nanite manipulation(Nanites can also be used to create elemental based attacks as well), Teleportation, spike shot
Abilities: Super strength, Enhanced hearing, hacker
A brief backstory: MTL is from a once existing future sent back in time to save the world from geno, after defeating geno MTL becomes a part of the that timeline prevent paradoxes... however MTL has many foes that he must fend off to keep things at peace.
I woke up at 5:00 A.M. da the sound of birds chirping. They seemed so happy and were Canto for joy. But I didn't understand that. I mean, why would te sing for joy if te had to go to school right after te wake up, which isn't any fun because everyone at school hates you, the teachers, students, EVERYBODY! And if te think it’s a relief when te get home, you’ll have to do tons of homework, later doing chores, and you’ll have to live with a dad that seems to hate you. Yeah, there’s really no reason to sing, well, unless you’re someone besides me.
Well let me introduce myself. I’m Christopher (Kris for Short), and I’m one of the most miserable people you’ll ever know. My mom is dead, my father hates me, and I have a stupid curse put on me and-ugh! My life is just terrible. I’m trying to have hope, but I don’t think I’ll ever find it. If te want to know the whole story of my life, you’ll just have to read on.
Well let me introduce myself. I’m Christopher (Kris for Short), and I’m one of the most miserable people you’ll ever know. My mom is dead, my father hates me, and I have a stupid curse put on me and-ugh! My life is just terrible. I’m trying to have hope, but I don’t think I’ll ever find it. If te want to know the whole story of my life, you’ll just have to read on.
These Are The My Bio Facts About My FC Taylor The Hedgehog
Age: 24
Sex: Male
Likes: Females Who are Nice And Friendly, Friends Who are Also Nice, Helping People Whoever Needs Help With Something, Defeating Enemy.
Musica Genre: Musica He Likes To Listen Too (Except Rap And R&B)
Dislikes: Bad People, Call Him Names, Make Him Angry And Upset, And Doesn't Like To Be Betrayed
Born: November 6, 1989
Powers/Weapons: Sword, Shoots Laser beams, Fire, Ice
What Heals Him When He gets Hurt: Apples o Berries
Those Are The Facts about Him :)
Age: 24
Sex: Male
Likes: Females Who are Nice And Friendly, Friends Who are Also Nice, Helping People Whoever Needs Help With Something, Defeating Enemy.
Musica Genre: Musica He Likes To Listen Too (Except Rap And R&B)
Dislikes: Bad People, Call Him Names, Make Him Angry And Upset, And Doesn't Like To Be Betrayed
Born: November 6, 1989
Powers/Weapons: Sword, Shoots Laser beams, Fire, Ice
What Heals Him When He gets Hurt: Apples o Berries
Those Are The Facts about Him :)
Time for some fun facts! 8D
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~Estelle was originally a character up for adoption.
~Full names for each character:
Estelle Potter
Zak Potter
Shiro Kuchisama
Norax Williams
Myka Hyne
Nazo furgone, van Deursenne
Anaya Sullivan
~Nazo was created originally as a character in the fanfic, not an ACTUAL character.
~Shiro's name is japanese for White. (DUHHHH)
~Zak and Shiro only have one picture.
~Anaya's name used to be spelled like this:
Aniya
~In 'The Fifth Experiment', Estelle was killed when Zak was young, causing him to get vengeance.
~I created Estelle for 'Kickbutt Inspirational' purposes.
~Anaya was the only character I gave powers, until today.
~I changed Anaya and Myka's personalities as I RPed with them more;
Anaya went from kind to a sarcastic jerkface.
Myka went from silent to an annoying chatterbox.
~Myka's the only one with a lifestory.
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~Estelle was originally a character up for adoption.
~Full names for each character:
Estelle Potter
Zak Potter
Shiro Kuchisama
Norax Williams
Myka Hyne
Nazo furgone, van Deursenne
Anaya Sullivan
~Nazo was created originally as a character in the fanfic, not an ACTUAL character.
~Shiro's name is japanese for White. (DUHHHH)
~Zak and Shiro only have one picture.
~Anaya's name used to be spelled like this:
Aniya
~In 'The Fifth Experiment', Estelle was killed when Zak was young, causing him to get vengeance.
~I created Estelle for 'Kickbutt Inspirational' purposes.
~Anaya was the only character I gave powers, until today.
~I changed Anaya and Myka's personalities as I RPed with them more;
Anaya went from kind to a sarcastic jerkface.
Myka went from silent to an annoying chatterbox.
~Myka's the only one with a lifestory.
Areil The Bunny
