Part 1
da chocopockyninja
I closed the door of my newly bought smart car and walked up to the Pretty white house where my friend Sofie lived with her boy friend Duncan. I rang the door campana, bell and heard their dog Bonnie bark like crazy. The door open and out walk Duncan in nothing but his boxers.
"What are te doing here?" Asked a very tired Duncan.
"Did te forget the Cedar Point trip is today? Its 9 a.m. and it takes an ora to get there Hurry!!" I detto to Duncan. With out a word he ran up stairs, I hope to get dressed and wake Sofie. While standing out side scratching Bonnie I heard Sofie yell,"Oh I totally forgot!" and i smiled. About 5 miniutes later they ran out of the house.
"Sorry about that, we were up late watching movies." detto a tired Sofie.
"No its ok! Were meeting Kona~chan, Rob, and Lucy there to!" I detto walking with them over to the car. They nodded in a proval and i opened the up me door. "Who wants to sit up front??" I asked with a big grin on my face. Sofie's hand went up in the air first. "Sofie gets to sit in the front!" I announced! Duncan smiled and sat in the back/trunk thing. We drove off listening to 96.5 baciare FM. We chatted about Anime, what rides we would ride and how we hadnt seen Lucy o Rob is such a long time since they got together. We were so excited.
An exit was coming up and we were all a little hungry, we didnt have any breakfast. So I Pulled through Wendy's.
"So what do want guys?" I asked.
"I'll have a frosty! A vinalla one!" Sofie detto smiling that cute Anime smile.
"And for te Duncan?" I asked looking behind me to see him.
"I just want a salad, with ranch dressing." he detto looking out the window. He looked thoughtful.
I ordered and we were soon on the road again. We got off at the Cedar Point exit and thats when we got really exited. We all started looking for the Cedar Point Sky line as I drived, going 5 miles over the speed limit.
"Im so excited! I cant wait to ride Corkscrew like 100 times!" Sofie detto with this huge grin on her face. Duncan looked at her smiling and I just nodded.
da chocopockyninja
I closed the door of my newly bought smart car and walked up to the Pretty white house where my friend Sofie lived with her boy friend Duncan. I rang the door campana, bell and heard their dog Bonnie bark like crazy. The door open and out walk Duncan in nothing but his boxers.
"What are te doing here?" Asked a very tired Duncan.
"Did te forget the Cedar Point trip is today? Its 9 a.m. and it takes an ora to get there Hurry!!" I detto to Duncan. With out a word he ran up stairs, I hope to get dressed and wake Sofie. While standing out side scratching Bonnie I heard Sofie yell,"Oh I totally forgot!" and i smiled. About 5 miniutes later they ran out of the house.
"Sorry about that, we were up late watching movies." detto a tired Sofie.
"No its ok! Were meeting Kona~chan, Rob, and Lucy there to!" I detto walking with them over to the car. They nodded in a proval and i opened the up me door. "Who wants to sit up front??" I asked with a big grin on my face. Sofie's hand went up in the air first. "Sofie gets to sit in the front!" I announced! Duncan smiled and sat in the back/trunk thing. We drove off listening to 96.5 baciare FM. We chatted about Anime, what rides we would ride and how we hadnt seen Lucy o Rob is such a long time since they got together. We were so excited.
An exit was coming up and we were all a little hungry, we didnt have any breakfast. So I Pulled through Wendy's.
"So what do want guys?" I asked.
"I'll have a frosty! A vinalla one!" Sofie detto smiling that cute Anime smile.
"And for te Duncan?" I asked looking behind me to see him.
"I just want a salad, with ranch dressing." he detto looking out the window. He looked thoughtful.
I ordered and we were soon on the road again. We got off at the Cedar Point exit and thats when we got really exited. We all started looking for the Cedar Point Sky line as I drived, going 5 miles over the speed limit.
"Im so excited! I cant wait to ride Corkscrew like 100 times!" Sofie detto with this huge grin on her face. Duncan looked at her smiling and I just nodded.
Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if te can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please commento with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if te like to write commento me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank te and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would Amore it if one of te could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK te SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if te can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please commento with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if te like to write commento me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank te and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would Amore it if one of te could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK te SOOOO MUCH!
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the mostra had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the mostra all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the mostra all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.